Reviews for Fifty Silver SicklesBy : Refictionista |
I want to know if I can translate fifty silver sickles into Portuguese?
Obviously not for everyone, but I definitely liked it. Though your sex-scene writing style isn't what I generally like, I really loved the way you ended it. The tension you create at the beginning is a nice lead-in, and I also appreciated the way you tied in Malfoy's bigotry with his desire for Hermione, instead of writing it off as nonexsistent. Though some will obviously not like the way the sex-scene started, I'd definitely applaud your use of Malfoy;s cunning to make her say she wanted it before actually going ahead.
My only note would be to maybe shorten up the beginning. All the details in your introduction could be a bit more concise.
Interesting but highly disturbing. Like a rape "fantasy". I despise non consent, but the Biblical tie in in the end made it interesting
Very sexy ;) I've never heard that "law" before but I believe I like it now! Nice piece.
While AFF and its agents attempt to remove all illegal works from the site as quickly and thoroughly as possible, there is always the possibility that some submissions may be overlooked or dismissed in error. The AFF system includes a rigorous and complex abuse control system in order to prevent improper use of the AFF service, and we hope that its deployment indicates a good-faith effort to eliminate any illegal material on the site in a fair and unbiased manner. This abuse control system is run in accordance with the strict guidelines specified above.
All works displayed here, whether pictorial or literary, are the property of their owners and not Adult-FanFiction.org. Opinions stated in profiles of users may not reflect the opinions or views of Adult-FanFiction.org or any of its owners, agents, or related entities.
Website Domain ©2002-2017 by Apollo. PHP scripting, CSS style sheets, Database layout & Original artwork ©2005-2017 C. Kennington. Restructured Database & Forum skins ©2007-2017 J. Salva. Images, coding, and any other potentially liftable content may not be used without express written permission from their respective creator(s). Thank you for visiting!
Powered by Fiction Portal 2.0
Modifications © Manta2g, DemonGoddess
Site Owner - Apollo