Reviews for Illusions Of RealityBy : Alexa_Sterling |
I recently found this story and read the entire thing in about an hour. It was probably the best fanfiction I’ve ever read. I am so upset that there haven’t been any updates in so long but I just wanted to say that this story was really, really good. It made me smile like no fanfiction has in a really long time and I was genuinely sad when I saw that it hadn’t been updated. I hope that everything is alright and that no review or anything of the sort was the reason why you stopped posting. As I said, I just wanted to post a review to let you know that I really loved this story!
Please please please tell us what is going on with Hermoine and Draco. Also why does snape want Draco to stay in school? And lastly whow did those boys know about that curse. The one where they sliced up Draco. Are they part of the beyond? But most importantly. I love your story very catching. I would suggest involving Draco more. Like give him similar syptoms like Hermoine. That would be pretty cool. Or maybe havehim find out about what is wrong with her and have him try to fix it. Also why does it feel like their memories got erased ot something like that. It feels like maybe everyone is trying to hide something from the both of them. Well it feels that way to me anyway.
Love your story keep going its really good.
good chapter
I'm looking forward to the next update
You are really good at this and please keep going. I am absolutely in love with your story. You do have minor spelling errors and some run ons but other wise all good.
yay, the Dramione action is starting. I can't wait to see where it leads. and what that was all about with Snape & how it relates to what happened on the train. (but first a lemon, please)
The story has interesting potentia: Hermione's sex dream, the attack from beyond... Keep it up!
Please tell me there's more to come....
I wonder if Draco really attacked her or if that was in her head. Also I don't trust the new professor at all.
I am fascinated by your story thus far. That last chapter was sad but necessary. I can't wait to read more
amazing..waiting for it longingly!
Very nice start. Adventure, excitement, sexual tension.
The grammar needs some work to make reading it flow smoother.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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