Reviews for Lunaticus Book Three: New Moon RisingBy : JBankai89 |
I will come find you on AO3, can't wait to also get a reply from you XD
Thank you sooooo much for the time you have gifted us with. You have incredible talent as a writer. When reading your words I am really there, inside the scene which is a great experience.
The Malfoy mało better than werewolf quote from Harry is so funny, I have saved it on my PC as a screenshot. Love the wording. This chapter really is a highlight to (almost) end this enticing story on. "Grandpup" also made me chuckle :) lol.
Thank you for this wonderful series, I had so much fun and it was my pleasure reading this.
All the right amounts of thrilling action, drama, tension and fluffyness! Awesome masterpiece!
Your writing is wonderful and well developed and I saw this coming for quite a while now. I hoped for better for Harry and for Ulrich and even ultimately Remus. There are too many works that don't give the characters healthy endings and while understand these two characters being together as the ultimate goal it is sadly disappointing when you have developed your own unique well rounded characters and vision of the HP world. And for me the feeling instead of rage is disappointment. Especially from the view point of someone who has suffered abuse especially the emotional kind that you could first see Remus employing.
This is not to say I won't finish the story because I still want to see how it goes and I am hoping you find a way to heal Ulrich because out of all these people he deserves it the most
It would be interesting to know who is driving Greyback's trial. Perhaps Harry can engage some well known and recognised sympathetic lawyer to support Greyback especially as the anklet broke accidently.
Maybe the lawyer can discover some 'hidden' written plans to deliberately put a faulty anklet on Greyback, to then inspire a feral pack to attack ALL timed with the then abduction and incarceration of Greyback AND booking the trial to occur the day after the full moon.
Can't wait to see how this story pans out.
Poor Draco - it really is very funny. Love the witty comments.
I so hope Harry stays with Ulrich. He's perfect for him!
Ulrich is a great character but the writing makes it seem like in the end harry takes lupin back.
Loving this story and all the different interactions.
Waiting semi-patiently for the next update...
I started Lunaticus three days ago and it's so addictive that I've already caught up and am gaging for the next chapter. You are a fantastic writer! Even when you have time jumps it never reads awkwardly. I find most authors are a bit awkward with them. I love this series, and I'd love a side story too. It'd be nice to see that first date with Ginny and Draco :)
I love your writting! I was sick this past week and had a lot of fun reading everything you wrote in this site. My english sucks that is why I didn't comment in all of the stories but know that I love them and keep being awesome! I definitely prefer an early update since I'm very curious about this love triangle. Lot's of love to you!
I've been really enjoying this series. It's a nice new pace to a lot of different ficus. The only thing that bugs me is that I really like Ulrich. But I know he will end up Remus. It's a given. You know a)Ulrich will do something stupid, or b) Remus does something amazing (or Harry cannot thinking about him) and Ulrich being the good guy he is will give up harry or d) something happens to Ulrich.
Oh well I will enjoy it until the. XD good work so far though
LOVE your creativity and how this story is progressing! Keep it up!
Ulrich and Harry together will be so sweet.
How will Hermione be now she has had one turn with the other dominants? and will her relationship with Ron survive?
I suppose Remus will turn up again to unsettle Harry again, but I can't see Harry ever forgiving him and possibly Greyback for changing him and Hermione let alone Remus' extremely poor treatment of Harry as a bonded mate.
Can't wait for the next update!
AMAZING STORIES!!!! OMG in love with this pairing!!!
hello,
first and foremost, I want to say that you are easily my favourite authors in the fan fiction world. I read all your Lunaticus stories within one day. I absolutely adore your writing, it's moving, sexy and heart breaking. The character development is excellent. Lupin is just brilliant...sexy..nothing is sexier than a dominant and aggressive Remus XP.... I'm not usually one who writes review unless I'm IN LOVE with a story and that's saying something!
congratulation on such success!! Thank you for creating such beautiful pieces of work. I'm dying to see the end of the story!
love,
jen
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