Reviews for Learnt in the CradleBy : Sasunarufan13 |
I love this one. Wish you would expand on it. Make it a full length story as they get older and mate. Great job.
That was too cute:) I can't stop smiling and cooing like a crazy person. Thanks for sharing.
Really enjoyed it.
I loved this!! I'm kind of sad that I can't keep reading more and watch then grow up together.
I thought you did brilliantly! Well done.
And since you asked...
"That particular bloodline had become rather deluded throughout the years" - diluted
I really like this one!! I think you should keep this as a prologue and write a longer story going from there into their school years and them getting closer and finally becoming intimate. I think it has great potential.
That was soooo cute! Loved it
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