Reviews for This Body is My PrisonBy : JBankai89 |
Love this book.
Marvellous, just wow. You did an amazing job. Sort of wish we got to see how the kids did at school and with the malfoys but this was still perfect.
when they were together that i belive their relationship came so naturally that they didn't realised the romantic shift and the twins I loved them!! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!!! This could perfectly count as one of my favorites ones
Lovely chapter!! Aww Teddy is just a very sweet boy! And his playdate with Davin was so cute! I've really enjoyed this chapter!! And it was so hilarious when Teddy said about the draco And cassie wrestling Hahaha
Your beta readers said it would fel like a gratuitous smut scene??? Well, yes, of course, but that doesn't mean you shouldn't have included it! :) I'm glad you addressed the naming of the kids, cos it's ALWAYS bugged me that Harry clearly named all three of his (canon) kids. Where the hell is Ginny's input in all that?! Argh! (Sorry, my issue). Anyway, nice ending to show they got things sorted out. SP
It's good that Cassie let Remus know that Harry in a sense is still alive. Also with all that Cassie went through it's understandable why she would react the way she did while trying to calm down a screaming baby.
I was hoping there'd be more than one more chapter left as there still seems a lot to wrap up, but I trust you'll deal with it all and not leave me hanging! And who knew Draco could be so sweet?! SP
CH9 - Well that was brutal (Draco's canquishing of Voldie). and Awww, Cassie wants to be a Malfoy. Well, she wants to be Draco's. SP
Wow Draco just dived in for the kill! I feel bad for the healer getting cursed to death though :( . I wonder if Bellatrix went back to Azkaban or if she was killed too?
Aww that was so lovely!! I wish to read Draco and Cassie marriage !!! They are so cute together!! Can't wait to read more!!
I loved it!!!!! This chapter was so lovely!! I'm glad Cassie is finally giving herself a try to have normal life and to have a romantic relationship with Draco! He already loves her! I'm agree with her when she explained to Hermione that she won't hide the true parentage of Davin with Tom Riddle! Because it would be so sad when he would realised of that awful truth
Can't wait to read more!!!
Enjoying! Loving how seet and supportive Draco is being. And bloody typical Ron, more focused on checking out Cassie's assets than helping his friend! SP
I'm glad it didn't go as bad as it could have gone and hopefully they'll be able to work through this in all good time.
Oh Davin is just so cute! Even he knows his mum is holding him too much lol.
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