Reviews for Temporary MateBy : Lomonaaeren |
Ch19 - I love your Narcissa! (Both in this and in 'Narcissa Militant'). She's so badass. I snorted when she told Draco to call Lucius an imbecile. And it's great that she's on Harry and Draco's side. Also, I think it was good that Draco seems to be understanding Harry a bit better, the 'He's so scarred' was just so beautiful. SP
Ergh, stupid Lucius. Trust him to be the most difficult about this. Of course, I'm not worried that Draco would agree to his demands and abandon Harry, but I do worry about how far Lucius is willing to go to break them up.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
I missed some chapters, so bumper update! So much has happened, and Draco is being awesome. Love that he's finally reassessing his views of Harry and is being so good about driving away idiots (although Harry is tough enough to do that generally - he's too nice to be the git needed for really pushy people though). So sweet. SP
That ending though! This is really good. I like the chemistry between Harry and Malfoy. Though I do think Harry is a bit of a butthole and needs to give in or be more understanding sometimes but I give him props on being so loving to his partner.
It's nice that both Ron and Hermione are willing to try for Harry's sake, please update chapter 17 soon.
Well, Hermione and Ron took that better than I expected, although I cracked up at Ron putting his hands over his ears so he wouldn't have to hear the details of Harry and Draco's relationship. Classic.
Looking forward to more!
It's good to see that both Harry and Draco are mature about their relationship, especially since they're still new to it. They're starting out with a strong bond building, communication, as well as compromising.
I knew things in the wizarding community was gonna be a pain, but wow! They started even before they made it back to it, can't wait to see how both Draco and Harry are gonna work through it all. Please update chapter 16 soon.
about #15..
Me likes.....veddy good to see Harry gets some things straight, instead of just being a 'silent partner' in this bond.
Well, we knew things would get a little complicated when they got back to their world. At least Harry and Draco were able to talk out their issues and (it seems) resolve them for the most part. I can't wait to see how Ron, Hermione, and the rest of the people close to them react to this development!
Ch15 - Aww, cute slightly nervous Draco. Liked Harry explaining about him and Ginny, and how close Harry and Draco got to a kiss. Stop teasing! SP
about #14...
Elentaeri needs to find her match....who will keep her in line.
Ch14 - Well, hotness! And nice to see the Elentaeri issue is resolving itself without Deaco having to smack her. SP
Yes! I loved that they switched it up. Beautiful scene. I'm also glad the negotiations seem to be going well so far and the Elentaeri situation is pretty well handled. Can't wait for more!
I really hope Elentaeri doesn't become a problem, please update chapter 14 soon.
Loved this chapter! I especially appreciated Harry's continued definitive but cool-headed rejection of Elentaeri. She was really getting annoying but Harry just kept true to his bond with Draco and never snapped. Impressive.
It was also great to see the deepening of Harry and Draco's romantic partnership. I look forward to seeing how they handle things when they get back to their world.
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