Reviews for Temporary MateBy : Lomonaaeren |
Ch13 - Oh Elentaeri just needs smacking into the middle of next week. Possessive Draco is too cute for words! And, Harry's comment was so romantic, it was ridiculous. Awww. SP
Aww - Draco/Harry oral sex! Very hot! Poor Harry will be wiped out if sex is always like that with Draco. Yipes (lucky boy). SP
I'm glad they were finally able to prove they are true mates, but I really hope they don't have to go through anymore tests once they're in their world do they? Please update chapter 13 soon.
Oh the arrogance of some Veela thanking goergous Harry and dreamy Draco don't belong together. I await patiently (held back and tied down) for the next installment. Can you at least drop a hint to a eagerly awaiting fan as to the message that Draco has?😉
Well, that went unexpectedly well. I was expecting more bitching from the Veela that it couldn't possibly be a true bond. Nice to see they've shut up about it (for now). SP
Phew! So glad they passed! Not that I doubted the truth of their bond, but I was worried that the Veela would do something to sabotage them. I'm glad that wasn't the case, and I loved the unwavering faith that both of them had throughout the experience. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I'm absolutely loving this story, can't wait for chapter 11!
Wow! Like how Harry is acting... Hope the separation and examination doesn't cause Draco to Snap...
CH10: Really hope the test isn't anything that's going to upset Draco (like putting Harry in danger) as I can see heads being smashed! I like that Harry is still Harry in this - stupidly brave and wants some elements of normality. SP
'love your fics...
about #9..
Have to say this chapter is my favorite, course I always did like action....but a big fish coming out of nowhere....priceless!
Great chapter! I love seeing how Harry and Draco are navigating this new bonding and the emotional baggage that comes with it. And (true confessions here), it makes me a little hot how protective Draco is of Harry, and I love that Harry is willing to roll with and accept it rather than fight against it all the time. Can't wait for what's next!
I'm glad Harry gave in to Draco (and my goodness the bonding was intense!) and they're beginning to work together and sort through Draco's Veela tendencies. Awesome! SP
Omg. I love a veela Draco. He is so ..... Yummy. I can't wait to see where this store is heading. So far the story is easy to follow but not so easy as to guess what is going to happen next. Great job. Please update soon.
Wow! Totally worth the wait. I think this is the best Drarry story I've read. Always excited when you update!
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