Reviews for Temporary MateBy : Lomonaaeren |
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I'll be looking forward to the morning after and how this changes things for them.
Bout time!
Interesting story, can't wait to see what's going to happen next, please update chapter 7 soon.
This story is very good. I look forward to the next chapter!
about #5..
Damn Harry [and authoress]...that was kind of lowdown, hitting a man in the back. Tho' I can't see why Harry refuses to see that the bonding has already started & is just about done.
Just give in Harry, it's too late.
This is a great chapter. Excellent writing. Can't wait for the next update!
Hmmmm mid-air sexy time. Intriguing. I like.
I'm a bit mad at Harry, though. I know he's trying to do right by Draco's human side and trying to protect himself as well, but his final act was high-handed, in my opinion. Draco is not going to be happy when he wakes up.
I really love this story. Thanks for the update.
about #4...
Aaahh man! You HAD to stop it there??? :-p
Yum! I just love the dynamic you're creating here as the emotions get deeper, and they can't sort out what's "real" and what's Draco's Veela. Absolutely delicious. You're striking a good balance between action and emotional content as well. Can't wait for more!
about #3
Umm...you are going to explain what tha' hell the thing was???
Oh I noticed you don't post like you used to. Busy?
Reading and waiting for more!!!
about #2...
Well I'm finally caught up on stories.
This is going to be an interesting journey, it starting off pretty good...can't wait for the sh*tstorm.
I'm really enjoying this so far! I love the tension you create by having them acknowledge their mutual attraction even though they know they should resist acting on it. Can't wait to see what happens!
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