Wow that was intense!!!! More please.....

OMG MORE PLEASE!!!! We need to see it from Severus' point please, to know how she is affecting him.

Ok, I normally never review anything, but holy crap your Snape is so intense...

It is amazing really please continue 

This story is coming along quite nicely. The tension between the two is efficaciously potent, in a way that it seems to be rendering them from the inside out. That kind of duality is delicious and dangerous. I look forward to the next installment. -BM

PLEASE . KEEP . WRITING !

well it’s winter here and I’m slowly freezing up so don’t count on it! - I'm not picky about the season as long as I have new chapters to read ;) Freezing? Really? How low temperatures go  during winter at your part of the world?

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I have to say, I love this chaptr, it is hot and meaningfull :)

The opportunity to finally tell him exactly what she thought of his actions had been all too liberating/She’d thought him impenetrable, untouchable. Apparently not - or it was opportunity to lash out, like little kid throwing a tantrum when it's angry and doesn't really knows why ;)

She suddenly found herself missing him, and not simply to put him on his arse again . . . strange. - she is missing familiarity, even a bad thing are welcomed as long as they are familiar. Hermione doesn't handle change well :D

What could he do to her when he was angry? What was he capable of? - oh, but is he angry?  He's hurt, but angry...not so sure.

Her friends had assured her that they didn’t care about them but she would never let them go—she couldn’t. - denial is so great, deanial is her best  friend as it seems 

she dressed in her nightie, her lust-and-alcohol addled brain considering it the best attire for apologising in - apologizing or getting what she's going for?

The fingers of one hand balanced a wine glass; draped from the other was what looked like a long cigarette, a thread of smoke meandering upwards and dissipating in a bluish haze above his head. - uhhhhhh, be still my heart! I. Want. Him!

I just love the bit where he suck the wine from her clothes rather than skin, it so intimate and detached at the same time.

“Now suck me,” he ordered. “Make me believe you.” - fck! It is already insanely hot hre as it is, now you are adding fuel too

You’ve never been with a woman before - is he putting ideas in her head? not that I'm complaining :D

“How many points?” - is she inane???? :O

“None,” he responded, threading the firm ridge back and forth over her electrified bundle. “This will be your apology.” - can I apologize in her place? :D But now I'm wondering, what is the true apology, what they are doing or the fact that she did seek him out. She came to look for him, more than to apologize, she needs him - not the points, not even the book or want as much as she couldn't bare the idea of not having...that...with him. I think that he's just giving her a bit of hard time, in retaliation for hurting him.

“Hard.” - uhhhhhhhhhhh

“I accept,” he whispered, his lips brushing her cheek. “I accept your apology.” - bloody hell!

looking at her with such naked concern that it choked her anew - I was right, wasn't I? He is just fluffy teddy <3

She was clearly not the only one who didn’t know what they wanted. - I'd say that he knows what he wants, but one he never expect to get it, and two I don't think he expected to fail so profoundly. He wanted to help her, to heal her maybe not in the best way, more the only way he knew how. what he didn't expect is for her to actually connect. He gave her plenty of reasons to hate him in the same measure as she should come for more of whatever he was offering. I don't think he even imagined that she could do what she did. which does say a lot about him, about how he still see himself.  And how she would end up if he doesn't help her.

From behind her came the explosive sound of shattering glass. - poor broken Snape :'(

Can't wait for the next chapter, to see what's going to happen next.

Love&Kisses&Hugs xx

Wow little dangrous with a glass bottle but needed. Sounds like people catching some feelings here!!!

BLOODY HELL. 

MY FUCKING FAVOURITE CHAPTER FROM THIS STORY. 

GREAT THING I'M AT THE CORNERMOST PART OF THE CAFE I USUALLY STAY IN TO WRITE AS READ FANFICS. THEY WOULD HAVE THOUGHT ME CRAZY WITH ALL THE EXPRESSIONS I HAD MADE. 

DAMN YOU. 

POST SOON! 

Such a great chapter, well worth the wait for sure! I love the conclusion and I'm so glad Hermione had the balls to kiss him in the end. Your Snape puts up such a facade of being disconnected from the whole situation, it was such a refreshing turn. Not to mention the change of scenery into his own personal quarters, not just his office. 

They are both so confused about what is actually transpiring between them, on an emotional level. I also loved that real reverlation that Snape makes, in regards to her whole idea of who Hermione is anymore. Breaking apart how she previously invisioned herself, unbeknownst to her, therefore allowing her to construct a new sense of self, really as an adult.

Awaiting your next chapter!! 

Just wanted to say a quick thanks for your writing. You write beautifully. Not revealing so much that you baby us as readers but also giving wonderfully descriptive language to ensure our imagination can be there and see your story unfold. Your characters seem true to life... or realistic... or believable... or whatever is the correct term for fictional characters that don't seem forced or fake. They remain true to the originals but have their own idendities... An expansion on what we have already and that could be true given the ptsd they must surly suffer from (given the events of the original stories). Really enjoying your stories so thank you!

Mmmmm, we're getting more meat in both the plot and the perviness. Yummy.

"It was pretty typical of her life now—watching the world pass by as a somewhat distant spectator, rather than experiencing it. And when their laughter hit her—tinny, echoing, like that from a television . . . she drowned it out . . . with another drink."--And that pretty much summarizes the giant hole she's living in all the time. She's either forcing an adrenaline rush or hiding from the truth. Either way, she's not facing her feelings.

"sitting, she could almost convince herself that she was only tipsy. But standing she was drunk—"--Hahahaha! Been there.

"recklessly so, aggressive even, like she could easily punch someone in the face."--I love the flailing freedom she's feeling. All that emotion struggling to get out one way or another.

"If Draco was about she might do it again. Pity he wasn’t. She suddenly found herself missing him, and not simply to put him on his arse again . . . strange." --:) No, not strange. She misses the rush of rivalry. He's good at pushing her buttons--just like Snape.

"What was he capable of? The thought made her so horny she found herself grasping her pussy and wincing"--:D Gee, that's not telling at all.

"How could his actions both oppress and liberate her?"--That's the million Galleon question. But I'm not seeing much oppression going on.

"There were warning bells going off all over the place but she was drunk and gave herself permission to ignore them."--Hahaha! Handy that. I usually just stick my fingers in my ears.

"Clumsily peeling off her clothes, she dressed in her nightie, her lust-and-alcohol addled brain considering it the best attire for apologising in,"--Bahahahaha! I love how puposefully obstuse she's being. Even when she's not drunk, she convinces herself to be sexy, but then, later, after the action, she goes all moralistic and acts as if Snape was the sole instigator. I'm sure this attitude is more common than I realize. How could it not be when society tells women to be sexy but then punishes them for being sexual. Instead of owning their power, they're taught to be ashamed of it. And Snape keeps feeding her fears, saying things that make her feel more object than human. While I find the animalistic nature of sexuality fascinating, I think for many people being compared to wildlife might raise some hackles. He's clearly keeping some kind of distance between them by referring to her response in such a detached manner, but his actions afterward convey the opposite, a need for attachment and humanity. Now, I'm rambling. Must finish reviewing.

"She made good time—or lost track of time."--Hahahaha! Perfect :)

"It was a warning."--Yeah, a sexy warning. Go in!

"Small drifts of smoke curled ethereally from his lips with each word."--MMmmmmm! You know how much I love smoky Snape.

(pickle you’d be in did you?--comma between in and did)

"from the ashes like some fraudulent phoenix—rekindling the hopes of the gormless Gryffindor initiates"--Oh gods, yes! Snape gets all alliterative after a bottle of wine. *drool*

"bringing with it an unpleasant vulnerability that she had enjoyed shedding, if only for a short while. She wanted that brash courage back, the one that had come so naturally, so easily, when she was younger—invoked by the constant barrage of dangers they had faced, and driven by their shared sense of purpose"--And there it is. The first glimpse of the underlying issue. I wonder how growing up under the constant threat of annihilation affects the developing adolescent brain. I would think it would instinctually link danger with sex, conditioned to entwine the two unless counter-conditioning is provided.

"And I see you’ve brought with you your fervid feminist principles?"--Bwhahahaha! Burn! I would have come back at him for saying something like that to me, informing him that feminism and sexuality are not mutually exclusive--but I might have been snorting to hard to speak for quite some time.

"You don’t have all the answers, Miss Granger.” He leaned closer. “You never did. I attempted to make that clear to you despite your desire to prove otherwise.”--Ah! And we have some of Snape's motive. Excellent.

"And now I believe you’re ready . . . to feel,"--And a bit more motive. Even more revealing.

"like a not-so-innocent Dorothy . . . a Dorothy pleading to the Wizard for courage, a heart . . . for home"--Oh fuck. Right in the feels. And such a great comparison. 

"From behind her came the explosive sound of shattering glass." --Aaaaaaaahhhhhh! No, you can't end it there! Inquiring minds need to know all!

You have so utterly bewitched me with this story. The vulgarity is stifling, but incredibly hot. The erotic words he spouts exhilarating. The emotions so amazingly raw and bleeding. I go back to my initial phrase of being equally parts disturbed and turned on. I cannot wait to see where this goes. As always, you’re brilliant.

Oh.. her final words to him in the office... Ouch!!! This just got real in the feels department real fast!!! Impatiently awaiting the next chapter as always!

I love all your stories, and find myself coming back to read them again and again. I just got another HP fan onboard with this ship starting with your, doing it for the order story! 

Oohh shit she fucked up big time. Bring on the hardcore punishment for the next meeting!!!

in my head it is possible but it does require a bit of dexterity, and maybe a little bit of magic ;) - it is fine then, thanks for clearing the confusion :)

Hope you get that rest xxoo - thanks, I didn't get more rest but I did get more work, this is going to be loooong summer, I'm counting on you and OO to get me through it ;D

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OMFG I LOVE this chapter, it floored me completely :)

 to fuck her up, to leave her confused and bewildered and questioning everything . . . including her sanity - I adore these after effects of Snape' sextherapy (where can i sighn for one, I'd find something for him to poke out or beat out, I prommise!!! :D )

But could it ever be restored in a healthy way? After everything that had happened, she doubted it was even possible for her to be knitted together into anything resembling a whole - I know it is the hardest part, but I just love this part of the therapy when you deconstruct, when you start thinking and questioning instead of hiding from yourself. But, I must confes, I am more in favour of your therapy method than for the one they thought us (no I'm not psychologist, but I went through training and even though psychodrama therapy as part of that training for working with highly sensitive social groups). And on that notion he did left her to leave maybe bit too open, too raw, without closure of freshly opened wounds, which would leave her seriously fuckt up.

“It was just the initial shock. You’ve earned heaps of points back. They just want to see you again—the younger ones especially. They really look up to you.” - What is she going to do now? Ginny if effectively taking away one of her "reasons", maybe the key excuse, to go back to him (I know there are still book and a wand). How she's going to justify to herself her why is she returning for more? :D

Her entire backside was covered with S-shaped bruises - mmmmm yummmy

mad brander - love this <3

“I did not claim that you could trust me.” - this made me laugh so hard

“Do you consider ‘liking you’ a requirement for the current process?” - ooooh yes she does! Either liking or hating, she has to justify his behavior somehow, if not, she can't justify her own reactions.

“Closer.” He pursed his lips around the word, entirely unperturbed. - hehehe brilliant!

“Whilst your fascinating feminist declaration is endearingly ardent,” he responded, his tone rich with sarcasm and condescension. “You have still failed to explain why I would wish to place my mark upon you . . . of all people.” - ouch! He just had to poke that wasps nest, did he? Bthw he is still acting like a doctor,  keeping the patient at the distance, preventing it to form a bond and infatuation and shift the focus to that new "like" instead deal with the problem.

“Because you have no one.”/The amusement seeped from his eyes./“No one would want you.” - Ouch, ouch, ouch! I'm wondering what she's have to do next and how little points wil she earn for her efforts after this. If he just doesn't leave her hanging on for a long time. This is promising!

Well, he may be helping her but he is still Snape, this is bound to be fun! Btw hun, story is spot on but you failed miserably in the "dark Snape" department, in all your stories...this one is fluffiest of them all. ;)

I hope that you are ok. 
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Love&Kisses&Hugs xoxo