Reviews for Make Me BleedBy : Insatiable_Fox |
I'd missed ch13 when it was posted so I got a double update (yummy). Ch13 was great. I did laugh at the elf kicking Lucius. And the sex scene was just the right side of disturbing!
Ch14 was incredibly sweet. Loved the poem. SP
Ch12 - Ooh, dramatic! Yay for Harry, Draco and Narcissa. I LOVED the line that only Muggles would idolise a man who got attacked by peacocks. Fricking hilarious! SP
CH11 - Okay, that was an intense chapter. And to end with the cliff hanger you have? EVIL! SP
CH10 - That was completely heart-breaking! I LOVED the final two lines though. I did smile when I read them. SP
Oh no!!! Harry!!!
CH9: Wow, that was intense. To have them finally kiss and acknowledge the attraction and then to have Draco's flight and Harry's reaction ... wow! SP
Ch8 - You really know how to make characters suffer. That opening description of Draco was just heart-breaking. But it was so sweet that he's realised he feels something physical for Harry, even if he's decided to hide it. And poor Narcissa (and the girl in the dungeon), Lucius needs a good ass kicking. Is one coming (eventually)? SP
This is disturbing and desperately sad (that's a compliment, btw). Looking forward to a long slow road of these two broken men starting to at least begin to heal. Even if full healing is beyond them, maybe they can find peace in their brokeness. SP
A completely new outlook for our two [heroes?] I like it.
I like the concept. Looking forward to reading more.
This looks like it is going to be amazing!
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