Reviews for Love and DesireBy : RedDawn |
Hi!
I upload my fanfictions on fanfiction.net. I like how easy the search function is over there. It shows a lot of details about the story like no of words and chapters so I can decide if it's the kind of fanfiction I want to read. I generally don't like the really short ones and I feel each chapter should have atleast 2000 words. You can also choose cover art.
I like your fanfiction so far too. There's a nice casual atmosphere.
I love this and I can't wait for more. The arthrithmacy assignment was fantastic, I love the subtle signs they are getting about the future.
I am glad neither is backing away from each other, no matter how awkward that prediction was for them. I am also glad Hermione made herself clear to Ron and his new girlfriend. Finally, I look forward to Hermione's revenge. lol Thanks! HG4eva
No critical review here. I am happy to see this story moving forward and am eagerly awaiting more. Their confusing pseudo-friendship is fun to wtch happen, though I feel bad for him for having to sit in those hard chairs the rest of the day. I really hope Hermione hexes the heck out of the jerks that did it when she finds them! Looking forward to the fallout of their assignment. :-) Thank you, HG4eva
great fic so far. I'm looking forward to a blow up with in the golden trio and more ROR time for Dramione
Such great beginning chapters for the story. I hope Draco decides to seek some help before the Slytherin bullies do worse than they already have. You wrote Draco's steamy dream so well. Looking forward to future chapters.
Really enjoying your story! Keep expecting Draco to think, got to write my therapist about this! (Tho I don't think he sees the healer that way)
anyways, nice job
This is a really goed story. Keep it up! I can't wait for the rest of the story.
Thank you for updating. :-) I really hope she sees how much he was abused before she lights into him. I am so sorry his attempt at chivalry turned so bad for him. But, I hope this will be the las time, as his champion may be on her way! :-) Thanks again! HG4eva
Oh, I am with you; no worries there. :-) I am enjoying this story and looking forward to more of it. I am sorry Ron had to be an ass, but I hope he will grow up through the story. Sigh... I am glad Draco was open to allowing her in and then opened up to her. I also look forward to her learning to trust him, as he proves himself. I hope Harry and Ginny are more mature and turn out to be better friends to her soon. Thank you! HG4eva
I like it so far. a good start
That was a great way to break the ice between them. I love that he has his own apartment now, thanks to the jerks who tried to run him off. I know he doesn't want to run to Minerva, but I hope someone catches the bullies and punishes them soon. Draco won't be able to keep turning the other cheek and deep breathing. Hmmm Maybe Hermione can be his champion... :-)
Thanks! HG4eva
I haven't read any new ff in aaaaages and this one is so good!!! I'm loving it so far, only concrit is that the chapters are pretty short...or maybe this is average length now... either way it's amazing, keep writing!!
Also I feel so sorry for Draco, poor guy :/ can't wait for the story to pick up a bit more!!!
Big Dramione fan. Poor Ron! He rarely ends up with Hermione in these fanfics.
I like reading what people smell when they sniff Amortentia.
Will definitely kee reading.
Cheers!
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