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Reviews for Narcissa Militant

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From SickPuppy on September 18, 2017

    CH10 - Oh crapola. I'm not sure who I'm most worried for: Harry or Voldie. I think Narcissa might kick his (V's) pasty white ass. And, ah, poor Draco. Silly boy, not asking, but still, he got snogged in the end. SP


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  • From staar on September 16, 2017

    wow just read it all and it had to stop there !!!!!!!!!!!! going to go nuts til your next update , to see if she gets there in time to help Harry !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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  • From BlackCrow on September 14, 2017

    I love this Narcissa! She's brilliant! Please finish the rest, I'm hooked! Although I'm feeling sorry for Snape he really did need a telling off. 


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  • From SickPuppy on August 31, 2017

    Ch9 - Oh, clever CLEVER Narcissa! Will there be a replacement first task now or will they go straight onto the second? SP


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  • From SickPuppy on August 24, 2017

    Ch8 - Oh I nearly missed that line, but lol - a teacher with chicken feathers fetish! Poor Harry, feeling all alone and unloved (by Draco). But yay, as always, for Narcissa. SP


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  • From SickPuppy on August 17, 2017

    Ch7 - Loved the line where Narcissa told Lucius he wouldn't see her again, and all that that implied about his future! Yay for Narcissa sorting out Barty Crouch Jr without having to go through the whole of GoF with him. And Harry was so adorable, fessing up to having left two substances in the bed. SP


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  • From SickPuppy on August 03, 2017

    Ch6: I loved poor Narcissa here, throwing her eyes to the ceiling, wondering why she was the only sane one. Just such a fun image. And Lucius seems to have enjoyed his punishment. SP


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  • From BookDragon on July 30, 2017

    Will there be more? I'd really like to see the end of this one!


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  • From BookDragon on July 30, 2017

    ooo I like this dark side of Narcissa but I'm not sure about Lucius. He seems too much like a lapdog.

    Back to reading!

     


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  • From SParker on July 29, 2017

    about #5...

    You couldn't write crack to save your life! :-p

    You're too serious-minded, sarcastic wit is more your speed. I think you should focus on the subtle humor that happens too fast for people to catch.....and start doing stories that start off one way but was going in another direction all along, i. e ''Keep It Simple Stupid''.

    You're good at it when you put your mind to it.


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  • From SickPuppy on July 28, 2017

    CH5 - I love Narcissa's internal dialogue - so sloppy - just brilliant! And I think Lucius may just regret that letter he sent! SP


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  • From SParker on July 22, 2017

    about #4..

    I gotta say...this story definitely has a different tone from your other stories...


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  • From InvidiaRed on July 21, 2017

    Very delightful.You make the best aspect of Narcissa even better


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  • From SickPuppy on July 21, 2017

    Oh she was mean to Severus! (Hilarious, btw). Loving that Harry is being trained in the Art too. More please! SP


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  • From Luthistar on July 14, 2017

    Definitely it was!!!' my friend!!!  great story and for me Narcissa just found the best solution to Tom Riddle 's diary and Lockhart at the same time! Well done!!!! 


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