Yes! Great chapter! There was so much I loved in this. I really like the interpretation of Albus as Death when Harry is talking to him at King's Cross. I've always interpreted it like Albus is a part of Harry's own psyche, but I like this better.

Also, great choice having Tonks and Greyback get together. It was an unexpected twist but it made so much sense. And it explains Tonks' feelings for Lupin even though he turned out to be such a dick.

And, of course your punishment of Dung was all I could have hoped for. Very karmic indeed.

I know the fates of Sev and the pup are still up in the air, to some degree, but I've got my fingers crossed. Can't wait to find out!

Really enjoyed Harry's discussion with death - very insightful of him to leave the stone there so he would not remain immortal.

Loved him telling Tom to piss off cos he was busy - big smiles when I read that.

What do I need .... hmmm

Severus to wake up and be okay.

The battle to stop when they see Voldie is dead.

Harry's pup to be okay.

Wizarding world to accept Harry as a werewolf (this would be nice - but I can see it not happening and Harry telling them all to f-off, then leaving with Severus)

Bring on the next update

Oh you great meany - I just hate cliff hangers.

Severus needs to survive and Harry needs to lose the horcrux but keep his baby and come back to Severus.

please, please, please

Awww, they're so cute! I <3 sweet!Severus.

What a bittersweet moment between Harry and Sev. Beautifully done.

I was wondering when sectumsempra was going to come back into play... although I don't remember everything from that moment in Changes so it's hard to guess how it will play out. At this point I'm just along for the ride :)

Your preview has me nervous, but one thing I know is that Harry is strong enough to not give in to Lupin again, so I'm having faith that he will find a way to return and kick Voldie's moldy butt.

Hope you update soon!

I cried at Harry and Snape's conversation. 

I loved the Changes and Advances exchange. 

I felt sick reading the preview of the next chapter. 

Please don't let there be a long wait before the next update.

Nicely done! I love that Draco grew some humanity and pulled Hermione out of the RoR... future romance, perchance?

As a fellow writer I understand you have to do your thing. I wouldn't actually expect you to change the story for my sake. I'm just venting my anxiety, really, by hoping they will all survive. But that's how you know you're doing a good job. I'm invested!

I can't believe how close we are to the end! I guess we'll find out soon who survives this ordeal. Can't wait!

A lot did happen in that chapter. I can't believe how close to the end we are... I am both excited and nervous

I love how this almost parallels the book, but just sliiiiiiightly deviates.

Hahahaha loved the goat references with Aberforth. Had me cracking up! Nicely done.

Also good on Hermione for her badass handling of the horcrux. They're so close now!

You're getting me really nervous for the battle. I want Harry, Sev, and their pup to survive so badly! Pleeeeaaaaseeeee??????

So I've had a think and I'm glad Dobby died over Kreacher. I've got a bit of a soft spot for the old grouchy elf. Glad Sev is back, I've missed him.

Poor elves! I'll be honest, this was a bit confusing. Did both elves die, or did Kreacher manage to survive? It's sad either way but I want to know!!

I'm glad they were able to get the cup without giving up the sword though. Now it's just the diadem left, right? (Plus the one in Harry... how are you going to solve that one, I wonder...)

I can't believe how close we are coming to the end already! I want it to last longer!

Not sure I want to talk to you after that! *pokes tongue out like a spoilt child* 

Well at least they got the cup... I hope there is smut soon to make up for that.

Well. That was certainly unexpected! 

Mmm I'm loving getting these double dosages of updates!

Great twist with Greyback! Unexpected but really well done. It makes total sense that Greyback would put someone he considered pack and their pup above stupid old Voldie. He's a bit of a rogue, after all.

It sucks that Harry's been outed, though. I hope this doesn't make things too dangerous for Severus. And I hope Harry doesn't fixate too much on the Hallows! Maybe Sev will come by and knock some sense into him? They need to get some more horcruxes taken care of asap.