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By : SickPuppy
  • From Book_addict_89 on August 06, 2017

    But if anyone can make it happen it's you. Harry doesn't have to die does he? You could find a way for both him and the pup to survive and kill the bit of voldy in his head. How long is Harry's pregnancy? Normal human length or wolfy length? 

     

    I hope everything goes well on Tuesday. We only had Georgie spayed so nothing to worry about but trying to keep a 6 month old puppy calm and resting is providing quite tricky especially when her brother doesn't understand that she can't play.


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  • From phoenix-rob on August 06, 2017

    Loved the update.

    Can't wait to see the payback Fenrir will reek once he is free from the Dark Lord's presence, and extra well done on dumping Bellatrix into it.

    Glad Harry and the pup are still okay.


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  • From Book_addict_89 on August 05, 2017

    Phew! No needless murder of Dobby. 

    The pup better be okay I'm invested in its survival. 

    Oh and glad your cats doing better! Getting medicine into an animal is so hard. One of my puppies had an operation yesterday and trying to get liquid medicine into her this morning was hard.


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  • From Thunderbird on August 04, 2017

    Gah! I missed so many updates! And these were stressful ones too. I am glad to not have to relive the trauma of the middle section of DH too much, though. You do a good job of touching on those elements but focusing on the new action we haven't seen yet.

    Ron is still annoying the hell out of me. I keep thinking he's going to do something to ruin everything. I guess he did make himself useful with the potion so Harry can apparate but small potatoes, I say, compared to what a dick he's being overall.

    Thank god Severus is entering the picture again. I was missing him and his steady competence. It was soothing.


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  • From Book_addict_89 on August 03, 2017

    How can you leave us like that? It's not fair. And now I sound like a sulking toddler. 

    I can't wait to read what you've got planned. I haven't got anything in the pipeline just yet. I write when I feel like it. That being said I've got quite a bit of time off work over the next few weeks so I'm sure something will spark my interest.


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  • From Book_addict_89 on August 03, 2017

    Oh god just had a thought!! Dobby!! I'm not sure I'm prepared to witness his death over again!

     


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  • From djaddict on August 03, 2017
    Sigh. Ron. He's such a...Good chapter! Please don't follow DH too much, lol. Bad stuff happened. :)
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  • From Book_addict_89 on August 03, 2017

    How did I miss this update?! 

    I'm glad Ron is less of an arsehole but he's still an arsehole.

    I'm really sad that they are already going to the Lovegood's because that means the story is getting closer to finishing and I'm not ready for that. I hope you are planning a new story already. Thank you for all your support with NWHCE. I've just uploaded the last chapter...

     


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  • From phoenix-rob on August 02, 2017

    Really really beautiful how much Severus loves Harry and how thrilled he is with the thought of the cub.


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  • From Thunderbird on August 01, 2017

    Oh! You are killing me with all the feels right now (in the best possible way). Harry's speech at his dad's grave was just heartrending, him having to reconcile was James did to Severus and what must be an innate love between father and son, despite everything. I like that he doesn't quite get there. It's clear he has more work to do, in that regard. Powerful stuff!

    I loved Sev's reaction to Harry's pregnancy. He is showing more and more of his sweet side and I can't get enough! I really, really hope this foray into the freezing pond doesn't affect the baby. It would kill me (and Harry, and Sev) if he had another miscarriage.

    Eagerly awaiting the next installment!


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  • From Book_addict_89 on August 01, 2017

    "You are not calling me mum!" Bloody brilliant!

     

    I can't get enough of this story. I loved Changes but Advances has long since replaced it as my favourite story on here.


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  • From djaddict on July 31, 2017
    Playing catch up again!Probably a good thing because you didn't have to read me whining about you stopping the chapter before the good stuff! LolI hope Snape is planning to tell him soon about the horcrux in his scar so they can figure out how to get rid of it without him dying. At least, I hope that is your plan!!!Thanks so much for sharing!
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  • From phoenix-rob on July 31, 2017

    Lets hope the pup is able to stay where it is, Perhaps when Severus is present everything will settle down for Harry.

    Great to see how supportive Hermione is.

    Love how Harry gave his father both barrels when telling him of his disgust at his behaviour when growing up. Just picturing Lily's response ... There is no where both James and Remus can hide that she won't find them. 


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  • From Thunderbird on July 30, 2017

    There was so much I loved in this chapter! You capture their desperate need for each other beautifully, and I'm also so glad that Severus is open to having pups and is protective of Harry and the baby he lost.

    The horcrux hunt isn't nearly as depressing with Sev there to help them out more directly. I wish he could be there with them all the time! They don't really even need Ron, and I'm somewhat disappointed to hear that he'll be making a reapperance, though I suppose I'm curious as to what he has to say for himself. Maybe he'll get over his bigotry??? Hmmm... not likely.

    Keep up the great work!


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  • From phoenix-rob on July 30, 2017

    Got to love Red Dwarf - rip it's nipples off.... OH I remember it so well.

    Lets hope Harry is pregnant as it's something he wants/needs so much.

    Go get that snake Severus - redirect the anger into killing the snake.

    Perhaps he can approach the Goblins to discuss the possiblity of a horcrux being within their vaults and they may mention ways they can be destroyed - they may suggest moving it to another item to maintain historical artifacts intact. Severus can ask if this is possible for living beings as well.....?

     


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