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By : SickPuppy
  • From Book_addict_89 on July 28, 2017

    Oh Hermione! Poor poor Hermione. As if it wasn't bad enough walking in on Harry alone but then to witness them throw themselves at each other in front of her. It's her best friend and her TEACHER! How she's ever going to be able to look them in the eyes again I don't know. She's just sat there with her book, rocking back and forth probably reciting the alphabet backwards anything to take her mind off what she knows is going on in Harry's room.

    As for Ron I think his homophobia is worse. He shold know better. I'm disapointed in him. But then I always was disappointed in him when he went off in DH. 

    xx


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  • From Thunderbird on July 27, 2017

    Argh! You stopped it before the really good stuff. Oh well. I guess it's just something to look forward to in the next chapter.

    I loved how sweet Severus was this time. It seems like his walls are coming down even more and he is finally accepting that Harry really does want him.

    Your explanation for Ron's behavior makes sense. It fits with his character that he would have such a narrow view of the way people and things should be and behave. And thanks for taking on my request about Dung. I'm looking forward to reading that down the line!

    Update soon please!


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  • From Book_addict_89 on July 26, 2017

    I'm just going to point out the obvious and say ron is a massive twat! 

    Oh and poor Hermione but really she should have known better. 

    Thanks for the double helping of chapters!!! :)


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  • From phoenix-rob on July 26, 2017

    So Ron finally shows his obnoxious personality.

    Hermione should no better than to interupt personal time - Harry may have been asleep rather than engaging in 'stress relief'.

    Can't wait for the next tiem Harry and Severus get together.


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  • From Thunderbird on July 25, 2017

    Whoa! You updated real fast this time. It was very much appreciated.

    I thoroughly enjoyed these two chapters. But man, Ron and Mundungus are both absolute bastards in your version! I'm glad Ron's gone, as he was really getting on my nerves (was his outburst at the end homophobic, or just because it was Snape?), but I still want to see Dung punished in some way. Karmic retribution and whatnot. Pretty please :)

    I'm sorry for Harry's pup, but it's true, it would have been very inconvenient to be preggers while on the Horcrux hunt. I'm glad the potion didn't affect his fertility in the long run. Can't wait for the next chapter!


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  • From Book_addict_89 on July 25, 2017

    Poor Harry! Still some of my favourite parts are conversations between Harry and his fluffy side. I'm interested to reading Snape's reaction to the pup. 


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  • From djaddict on July 25, 2017

    Oooh! Multiple updates I missed, more fun today then.

    Glad I could make you laugh a few chapters back!

    Sex in an alley, how cliche, lol. Steaming hot though.

    Pets Harry and Fluffy, sorry about the cub.

    Really enjoying this and looking forward to the next installment. 


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  • From Thunderbird on July 20, 2017

    I'm in agreement with Book Addict on all counts for this chapter. Loved the single-line scene and how it perfectly captures that moment. There are also all kinds of clues you're dropping right now! I'm especially intrigued by that last horcrux bit... the idea that the intentions and reason behind an act of magic is more important than the magic itself, as far as consequences are concerned. I'll be really interested to see how that plays out.

    Can't wait for more!


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  • From Book_addict_89 on July 19, 2017

    "Walking rather oddly, Harry returned to his two friends, a contented smile on his face."

    I spat my drink everywhere reading that line. Bloody brilliant.

    Has Harry become fertile and ready for pups or am I reading too much into the clues?

     


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  • From Thunderbird on July 15, 2017

    Uh-oh... I can see you're setting up that MPreg already. Wonder when that will come into play. No doubt it will make things complicated for all involved.

    Why must Ron be such a little douche? He and Harry need to work their business out or Ron's going to flee the hunt a lot faster than he did in canon.

    Looking forward to the next chapter, especially after that tasty little preview you gave us!


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  • From Thunderbird on July 11, 2017

    I will happily accept my cookie, thank you. And yay for smutty goodness! By all means, bring it on. We *pervs* need to get our fix!

    I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Parts of it made me laugh out loud, which is an accomplishment when you are currently dealing with some fraught situations. I especially loved the letter Severus included with the Snitch. You can feel the love come through in his words even when he's calling Harry an idiot.

    Eagerly awaiting what comes next!


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  • From djaddict on July 11, 2017

    Pervs? *sniffs*

    We're not pervs. It's not like we get enjoyment out of watching other people's private...

    nevermind. Pervs it is.  *smirks*

    I am really excited about the continuation of the story and I am probably a bad person for wanting the wolf to hurt, not bite, Tonks for comparing Harry to Him.


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  • From Book_addict_89 on July 11, 2017

    I almost stopped reading after the passage where Harry and Wolfy were having their conversation just to come and write how much I loved that section - it was very well written. I had a massive grin on my face the whole time I was reading it. Can't wait for them to be together again. I'm excited to see how you get them back together with everything going on around them. 


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  • From phoenix-rob on July 11, 2017

    Great start to the sequel.

    Severus and Harry must get together at least once more before they go to their separate 'jobs'


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  • From Thunderbird on July 10, 2017

    Well, alrighty. An intriguing start! I'm glad Harry has managed to get his transformations under control. And what a precarious freaking situation Severus is in! I always feel the anxiety reading fics with DH from his pov, but I feel like you've raised the stakes with all that he has to hide from Voldie. It stresses me out! (But not necessarily in a bad way)

    Looking forward to when Harry and Sev can reunite (of course), but also just looking forward to seeing how the Horcrux hunt and everything else will unfold with Harry's wolfiness in the mix!

    And thanks for the dedication :) I hope my reviews will continue to motivate and inspire. I know all too well how vital they are!


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