Reviews for The Devil You KnowBy : JBankai89 |
Holy Shit! I mean I knew it was Harry from the start, but I was holding out hope for a polyjuiced imposter and a happy ending. But when it turned out to be truly Harry I was like noooooooo and then his eyes flashed RED and I was like omg it cant be AND THEN it is! Is there a sequel? You can totally use that cliff hanger as a sequel! Draco trying every possible avenue, getting Granger and the Weasleys on board Idk even ask Dad Malfoy about dark magic and horcrux or have it that this sends Draco into a spiral of manic depression and trying to save Harry.....but if you don't this is a great end too
OMG, the ending sure was shocker, loved it! Pretty dark and twisted. Damn!
This was ingenious! Crime mysteries are sometimes hard to come by in the realm of fanfiction so this story was a real treat for me. You did great, keeping the suspense up until the ending (which was amazing, what a plot twist and dip into the horror-genre). Thank you for your time!
This is so thrilling! Damn, who knew you also write crime mystery!
Everything seems to point to Harry quite strongly...
BTW I think that you are good at describing these kinds of abusive behaviours without going over the top or portraying victim reactions wrongly. The theme keeps reappearing in your stories and so far you have never dissapointed. It's nice to have an author who touches these topics maturely and not deviate so much from how the psychology works with non fictional people.
I feel the same as you on this topic, but it''s cool to see how the characters situation is affected by this quirk. Plus having characters do stuff that you as the author don't agree with and have them do it in a believable way makes you a better writer.
You always portray everyone so clearly, it's quite amazing.
It was of course hinted in the A/N at the beginning that the assaulter will not succeed but I was still very afraid for Draco. Somehow the idea that he wants to stay Virgin until marriage would have made this even more traumatising for the character, interesting to observe this.
Love how the tension of the chapter gets resolved when harry and Draco find each other again.
THX
OMG this sentence is fabulous, I love it!
"Sitting across from Lucius when Narcissa entered the room were the two unlikeliest people to enter this house of their own volition. Even seeing them there, Narcissa wondered fleetingly if she was experiencing some sort of highly detailed hallucination of some kind."
Another one for my collection^^
Thanks for your great writing.
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!
Please tell me it isn't Harry! The words used in Hermione 's note were the same words she said to Draco third year. Their note reminded me of Severus. But the Malfoy's note reminded me of something a Weasley would say.
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