more please...

OMG I was so hoping to see another one for August

Definitely yes!!! I'm wondering if Snape will try to make Harry 's transformation a permanent thing when he uses all Lily 's hairs! 

MORE PLEASE!!!! I would write a full length review about the many different ways you could take it and what I would like to see, but this is my 3rd time writing this review and I don't want to type it all just for something to happen that prohibits me from completing or posting it.

I shall just tell you some general stuff of things that could happen, any of which I would like to see or am curious to see how you would write it or change it:

• Harry being manipulated into becoming Lily permanently, or just his sex slave with some body modifications.
• I am curious to see how the occlumency lessons/pensive inceident would differ, I mean there are so many different ways to go with that and have Snape manipulate the situation.
• Killing the headmaster and the Horcrux hunt, there is nobody really there to stop him from kidnapping the boy or doing something to him other than Voldy and that can easily be taken care of.
• Revenge on James Potter.
• Eighth year and after graduation, giving that they both survive Voldy after the battle.
• The fact that Harry is able to throw off the Imperious Curse later on, and maybe other mind control spells as well, and him being slightly more aware of his surroundings due to the fact that Voldy is back; the Dementors, Umbridge, Voldy being in his head, and Sirius dying in 5th year; and then all that shit in 6th year. It might lead to Snape not being able to make him think like a girl or hit him with a stunner. (This is one of my more easier to answer and prevelent curiousities.)

I have more but I am going to leave it at that. I was also planning on writing more about the questions I have for the story related to each bullet. I have like 15 just for the occlumency lessons and how Snape could manipulate the situation. So trust me when I say that this is short.

I do hope you write more and I am excited to see more of what you write in the future! (Also I read your profile and I saw your opinion on Anonymus reviews and while I agree with you about the fact that there are some horrible reviewers that purposley go anon so that way the comment can't be tracked back to them, I don't like one part of what you said. I understand that it is your opinion and you have a right to stand by that, because I do agree with you to some extent, because I have seen some anon reviews from some of my favorite stories that are so vicious, one person kept picking on this one person's spelling, granted there were many that made some parts harder to read, but they went through every single chapter (I believe there were like 15 at the time) and tore them apart wth not a thing about the story. I was so mean and horrible. I went to the persons bio before that and read what it said to see if they mentioned anything about maybe a learning disability or if they English was maybe a second language or something like that, which it didn't and English was most likely the first, but I did notice that some of the same errors that are in the story were there to, so there could be an actual reason behind it, but there was no reason to point out where EVERY SINGLE FUCKING MISTAKE they was. They have improved so much since then and I am so happy for them, but they lost so much confidence in themselves from that one Guest reviewer... It amazes me what a horrible person they are. AND THAT IS ONLY ONE EXAMPLE! I have seen so many other things that make me want to break my phone... I'm just going to move on before I get lost in my ranting. But you said something that if they don't have the time to make a fucking profile that you don't have the time to read their comment... That makes me about as mad as that reviewer. It would be one thing to say that you don't want to risk Flames or jackass reviewers that take advantage of the anon system, or just that you don't read anon comments so please don't leave them, but its an entirely different thing to flatout insult them by saying that. You are insulting the people leaving you a fucking review. I utilize the guest reviews on fanfiction.net all the time EVEN THOUGH I HAVE AN ACCOUNT!!! Usually because I read on the website via my cell phone and don't log into my account, or because the content that I read, I don't want my online persona to be impacted by the fact that I read such and such, or have the fact that I read those things to get back to anyone that knows me by this name IRL, which is why I changed the name on this fanfic website from my original in order to continue commenting on stories. And honestly I would on the others too, but I did make my presence under that original name more than on here and I had those accounts much longer than this one. So, yes, I use anon and guest reviews to leave comments because I don't have much self-confidence to leave a review with my screen name on there, because I know that those other horrible guests, if they really wanted to, they could track me down as well. I don't even think you CAN leave a review on here without logging in (I could be entirely wrong), which makes the insult totally uncalled for. While I understand your point and you can still have it, please realize that people that do leave guest reviews, there is no reason to insult them because they are taking time out of their day to leave you a review, and if they don't really read from this site or leave reviews, then why would they get an account. I only got an account on this site because I was trying to see if there could be some secret way to follow stories and get email updates when a story gets updated (AO3 and FanFiction.net apparently spoiled me), and other wise I would have never gotten an account. Why would a person who was just looking for a story that had something specific that they were searching for and found it in your story randomly, doesn't really use the site, and wanted to just tell you that they liked your story, make an account? THAT would be a waste of time. If you do get a horrible anon review THEN you can just delete it or laugh at the fact that they took time out of their day to leave that. If you want to continue the system of deleting all anon reviews then go ahead, but for the love of FanFictions, REMOVE THE FUCKING INSULT AT THE END BECAUSE THEY DON'T HAVE AN ACCOUNT!!! Many people say that any hate reviews instead of constructive critisicm will be removed. JUST REMOVE THE "HATE REVIEWS" PART AND REPLACE IT WITH "ANON/GUEST REVIEWS" AND YOU ARE ALL SET! NO NEED TO EXPLAIN! It doesn't bother me that you delete guest reviews, it bothers me that you insult every person that uses them just because they don't have account, or they might have one and for some reason they can't/don't want to use it to leave a review, so you are calling them lazy. This may seem pointless to many people, but small little jabs like this just set me off the edge. I hate when I read the challenge/request sections an when people call some kinks gross and disgusting, its rediculous and mean to insult them for insulting something some people like, as well as totally pointless. All they have to do is say that they don't want that kink and then your done. So please just remove it, and I shall get on all of the kink shamers soon as well, it has been on my to do list for a while now. I hope you change your mind about the reviews, but even if you don't, I applaud you for sticking to your beliefs, and kick you in the gut for insulting the innocent people that leave them. Hope to see the next chaper soon and thank you for reading my long ass comment, I just couldn't hold back the rant. I would say I am sorry but all I am sorry for is the fact that it is probably all over the place, but I am to tired to give a fuck and go back and edit it all.)