Reviews for Made of Common ClayBy : Lomonaaeren |
Ch6 - Oh, I am so loving manipulative Harry! He's so often portrayed as an idiot, and he isn't, so good job. Loved his reaction to Honeywell - putting the crest on - and his abstaining from voting. Brilliant. SP
I like how Harry is REALLY enjoying all the mayhem he is causing. He's having such a good time :)
Well so far this is great...Harry is going to kick a lot of ass here....really sad to see Susan not doing anything, you can see that she is a follower and a chicken at heart!!!!!!! you go Harry and Neville !!!!!!!!!!!!! hope to see more soon.....
Oooooh, clever, manipulative Harry! And yes, I enjoyed Lucius looking like he wanted to vomit and crawl under his seat, plus Harry thinking he might be seen as Grangy's pet human! Loving. SP
CH4 - I feel a bit sorry for Kingsley in this. I get why he's weary, but at the same time, buck up man! And I loved Hermione's comment that Harry wasn't bitter at all (not much), and that Harry could clal himself King-God-Emperor of Surrey and it would mean as much as the poncy titles the sun chamber uses. And threatening the assassin with cook your cock - oh I grinned! SP
This is amazing! I can definitely see the wizarding world have a version of the Freemasons or Illuminati running things behind the scenes, and then Harry getting in!
*Rubs hands in glee* Oh this is gonna be a fun ride!
Kitty5tatts
CH3 - I'm cheering Harry on from the sidelines. He is clearly having such fun messing with them! And I loved your begilded, begemmed, bejewelled, besplattered line. Such lovely rhythm to it! SP
Hah, loving this, they really dug themselves into a hole when they decided to give him that kind of power. First meeting and he has already caused a shakeup but is still able to remain below suspicion. Clever using there own archaic and frankly foolish customs to ensure his story sticks, prevent them from interfering in at least this trial AND managed to emberass both Malfoy's and cause dissension in their ranks and start to trim the herd a bit. Not just gonna stop the wheel, he really intends on breaking the wheel that is the sun chamber.
Neville is right, Harry can be very terrifying when he wants to be.
CH2: Go Harry! Go Rita! Kick their asses! Loving 'naive' Harry messing with the Sun Chamber. He's got quite the uphill struggle ahead, but then, Harry always did thrive on challenge! SP
oh boy, this group has no idea what they have gotten themselves into, not only giving Harry 2 lordships, they have also provided him with a long trusted ally in Neville and given both the tools they need to start enecating some real change in the current corrupt system.
CH1: My blood is BOILING! Those absolute asshole bastards for interfering in trials for justice! So so angry! *Takes a deep breath* Anyway, loved some of the lines in this - some needed levity in a very angry world: Loved the one about Harry interrupting because he'd run out of nighttime before she ran out of virtues; and adored the one about Selwayn had gone back to convincing the wall they were made for each other! SP
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