Reviews for A World Not Fit To Live InBy : snowblind12 & Lissa |
Another great couple of chapters! I’m really enjoying the direction that the story is going!
Another great chapter, look forward to the next one!
Excellent story but new(gulp) for me... It intrigues me about you two!!
Ginny drives me crazy generally, so I'm hoping for more there... I never saw or wanted a softer side of LM, so it's a stretch for me, but a very well written and thought out work. Looking for more. I am very much pleased by the strength of Hermione's magic and the garter and stockings are clever, ahem, in my opinion. Always ready.
Dean
I must say.... I'm not into D/s or rape(damn!), but I have enjoyed the story a lot... Kept looking for 21, lol.
I'm generally turned on by intelligent, feisty, and have always gathered that from Hermione. Not to mention Emma W is sexy, lol. But nevertheless, I am looking forward to more.
I never saw a soft side of LM , so that's a stretch, but I love your Snape. And Ginny kills me generally
Poor Hermione. She really just needs to catch a break.
Thank you for the update! I’m really looking forward to finding out what the potential fall out will be from Hermione’s FP result!
Wow! I usually get squeamish with Draco and Lucius pairing with Hermione, but you have me reading this in one sitting! Even through my lunch break and late into the night! I can't imagine what Voldie is going to do to Hermione after that test, I think the Malfoys have competition (as her bonder and forced lover yikes!!)
Oh wow, this story is really dark! I'm really interested to see what happens after the results of her test are known, it's making me a bit nervous actually. Hope you're able to update soon.
I’ve really enjoyed this story and would love to see how it ends, please don’t forget about it 😊
Keep it up
This story is really great and I look forward to reading new chapters!
Anxiously waiting of more
I’m just now getting into this story, but I’m loving it! I can’t wait to see where it is headed!
Lovely chapter
Great chapter! I loved it!! And definitely I love Hermione and Lucius pairing! I truly hope they end together in the end! But with voldemort she probably will ended married to Draco! For her well being i hope that doesn't happen to her!! Thanks for the update!
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