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Reviews for Unstoppable

By : Thunderbird
  • From Book_addict_89 on November 24, 2017

    Oh Hermione what are you doing? Ron is going to be gutted when he finds out and poor Harry. He was probably looking forward to having a conversation with an adult and she ruined that. If Hermione tells Ron I’m sure he’d look up the name for her. Instead she’s putting him at risk and jeopardising their relationship. For the smartest witch her age she’s acting rather stupidly. 

    I loved Draco in the previous chapter. I hope Andromeda is able to see Teddy soon I’m sure it would lift both their spirits. 


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  • From SickPuppy on November 24, 2017

    Ch15 - Devious Hermione! And she needs a good slap for not being honest with Ron, and for forgetting Harry!

    As for "bugger all". If you mean, "damn", then "bugger" on its own is good. If you want to mean "nothing worth having" then "bugger tits nothing" (yes, I know it looks ridiculous!) works (as does "Bugger all"). E.g. "What did you get for Christmas?"

    "Bugger tits nothing!"

    Otherwise, wank and wanker are both good for "damn" (wank!) and "asshole" (wanker). "Tosspot"/ "Tosser" also means someone who is less than liked. So many of our curses are about masturbation! Weird. A couple of odd personal ones I use sometimes: "Shit on a brick" (kinda means "damn" or "for fuck's sake!") and "fuck a duck!" (kind of an exclamation of surprise - "I got 100% on that test!" Me: Fuck a duck! Or it can be used as an exclamation of anger/frustration.)  SP


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  • From LadyShire on November 23, 2017

    Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family. I am concerned about Hermione getting caught by Ron. How could she break his trust? I am also wondering if we are going to hear about Cissy any more. I have been wondering what she has been up to. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. 


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  • From LadyShire on November 17, 2017

    Why do have a feeling that Mila is going to hand her baby over to Draco and Harry. I don't care for the lady that goes to the appointments with her. I want Draco to hex her so bad. It breaks my heart to see Dramada to go through the spells alone and not have her daughter and Lupin there with her. But I hope Teddy gets to see her real soon. As always love the story. You make me tear up with the story. I feel like I know everyone in the story. Can't wait for more 😊


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  • From SickPuppy on November 17, 2017

    Ch14 - Sorry RL has been difficult. And you have my sympthies for moving. I moved back home three years ago and I'm STILL moving stuff in from storage. Oh and bravo for using my favourite word - discombobulate!

    As for the chapter, loved Dromeda giving Draco some food for thought, and the background details about Lucius (and pink haired Draco - how badly do I want to see that?!). One question: Is "bugger all" (meaning "Damn") and Americanism? Cos in the UK (well, the bit I live in) "Bugger all" means "Nothing" (as in: Q- What did you get for your birthday? A- Bugger all!). Just wondering as I've seen it a few times in your stories and it has picqued my curiosity. SP


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  • From Book_addict_89 on November 10, 2017

    He definitely deserved what he got but I totally get where Ron is coming from. If they hadn't have stopped Vespa I'm not sure she would have been able to stop herself until it would have been too late and I don't want anything bad to happen to her. 

    I love writing Teddy. I think it's because I work with kids. There's something about the way they talk and tell stories that has me including them in my writing. 


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  • From LadyShire on November 08, 2017

    Wow Vesper is surprising me every time. I thought she would get back with ex. But she took a completely different turn on that. I still have hope for her and Blias. I can wait for the next chapter. I love how it is all coming together. I can't wait to see what other stories you have in mind. Keep on with the great story


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  • From SickPuppy on November 08, 2017

    Ch13 - My blood was boiling for Vesper when faced with Dempsey and I was cheering her on when she kicked his ass, but I get where Ron was coming from too.

    As for America's lack of caring about blood status, I hadn't considered it, other than to think they'd be worse, given their attitude to maj/no-maj's (God, what fucking unimaginative terms!) associating in Fantastic Beasts. But maybe, as it is the US, what a person achieves is more important than where they come from. Food for thought. SP


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  • From Book_addict_89 on November 01, 2017

    Teddy is just the cutest! So bloody adorable!


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  • From LadyShire on November 01, 2017

    The suspense is killing with the time in between the chapters. But I am loving the story everytime. As far as after this story is over I would love to see more about Harry and Draco. I hope we here how Aramda is doing soon. Been wondering about her. I hope the court case that is surrounding Harry and his colleagues gets laughed out of court. Can't wait for more. I will try to be more patient. Can't promise I will be.....lol

    I have so many ideas for more stories for you to write about Harry and Draco. I'm not a writer. So I will not be posting any stories. Hope to see more this week or next week. Much love to you from this huge fan of yours


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  • From SickPuppy on November 01, 2017

    Oh my goodness, how frickin' cute is Teddy?! Wanting to marry his best friend! And yay for hot smut! Interesting moment of Harry feeling like an outsider and wanting to be part of the family. Hmm. SP


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  • From SickPuppy on October 29, 2017

    I missed chapter ten, so yay, I get a double update! I want to know what's going on with Hannah and Neville, if Hermione will tell Ron (and how he'll react), and who Vesper will choose. So much! Loved the chapter(s). More please! SP


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  • From Book_addict_89 on October 28, 2017

    aww I love a bit of Ron and Hermione time!

    Blaise and Vespa might need their heads banging together. I just want to know what happened between them. 

    I can't wait for the next installment :)


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  • From LadyShire on October 26, 2017

    Loved the chapter. Man you are killing me. I will continue with my predictions. I meant to say after the treatments are done. Can't wait for more of the story. You have ne hanging on every word and have me jonesing for more. This story is my drug of choice. I hope you carry on with more stories of these characters. 


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  • From smn on October 26, 2017

    Wow it's been a while, I'm really sorry that I haven't been reviewing the chapters lately, this summer I've just been nonstop busy! But rest assured I've definitely not abandoned reading! I'm all up to date and am still loving the storyline! Sorry again for my absence but I'll try to leave more reviews on your chapters! 


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