Reviews for UnstoppableBy : Thunderbird |
Well, you weren't kidding about the feels in this chapter, were you? I almost cried. In all honesty, there are tears in my eyes, but I refuse to let them fall. It takes a lot to male a story make me emotional like this. It's a love/hate relationship: on one hand, I hate being sad and crying. But on the other, I love that you've touched on such a deep and emotional topic and managed to execute it with such grace and skill that I have no choice but to become misty eyed. With each chapter, I become more excited about the next.
wow that was hard on both of them....can't wait to see them with Teddie, poor grandma !!!!! thanks for the update, need some Hermione time !!!:):):)
I'm not crying! You are!
Another week, another great chapter! Loved Harry's little argument victory, that Fawley seems like a nightmare! You also managed to hit me with the feels briefly with Hermiones' little comment about the shrimp :'( I'm really into the "up next" reveal, definitely keeps me even more eager to read the next chapter than I already am, if thats possible ;D
Loved the chapter. Makes me wonder how Harry will take the news about Adramada. Is Draco ready to take in Teddy if she is really in bad health? Every chapter leaves me with more questions than answers. That is a very good thing. I hate the long wait in between the chapters. Great chapter and story telling
Yay! I always love a sassy Harry, and you've put a responsible adult twist to it. I think I like it even more!
It's great to be back! I simply have one word for this chapter and that WOW! Even though its incredibly sad what has happened to Hermione and her parents, I was totally distracted by how well this chapter has been written, seriously one of the best! Your ability to reflect the characters' emotions onto the reader is a real skill! I'm anxiousto find out if her parents will ever recover, their state seems to be severe but at least Hermione seems desperate to fix it. I just wish she would confide in Ron! Can't wait to find out more :D
Poor Hermione but she can be alot stubborn !!!!! she just has to ask for help and she'll have it.....and Draco and harry , poor things, there in for a bit of a read ther, hope Andy gets some peace even if she's sick....the boys will be so good for Teddy.....thanks for the update !!!:):):)):):):):)):):):)
I love Unstoppable and SMN. Can't wait for more of the story. What is going to happen with Teddy and Andromeda?
This chapter was depressing lol. Hermione is going to get people mad at her for keeping that a secret!
Honestly, I need more Drarry though!
Great chapter as always, are we returning to Vespa next?
Oh Hermione... You aren't making this easy on us are you?
Ch4 - Poor Hermione! And all that guilt eating her up, nto allowing her to share her burden with Ron. Here's hoping for something a bit cheerier for the next chapter. (Or else!) SP
I must confess, that while I may be a dedicated reader (although there are sometimes I don't live up to my name), I struggle to be a dedicated reviewer. This was a sad chapter, yes, but not poorly written. However, it also seems kind of empty to review this chapter when it's obviously setting something more up. I look forward to being blown away by the more, until then!
"No one can know, except her Healers, not unless I give my consent. If it gets out… it will make for a very tricky situation for me, for them. I simply can’t let that happen."
This line intrigues me.^_^
Chapter 3 man, poor Andromeda, you're a monster!!! That being said, I love Draco getting a perspective, does he still use the potions lab in their house??
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