Reviews for UnstoppableBy : Thunderbird |
I love this chapter. I really like getting to know each character a little bit better. I curious to see what will happen with Mila as the story continues.
Yas! Finally, I've been waiting for this! This new story sounds absolutely amazing, I love the new layout and I'm so excited to read more about the other characters, not only Harry's story, however it'll be interesting to see how that progresses too. Poor Andromeda, its nice to see how close Draco has come to his aunty, and I'm looking forward to seeing Harry and Draco form into father types for Teddy, even if it does mean bad tidings for Andromeda :( I'm really looking forward for this new story and can't wait to continue reading!
Yes! Another successful chapter! I love the depth you've given Draco. "Your reputation proceeds you", I truly loved that part. This twist about the maternity ward is nice, a unique direction. I can't wait to see how everything goes!
I'll say it here, just read the other story to this one...man was it good...now just caught up what this one....so good....I'm hooked !!!!!! hope to see an update again soon :):):)
I love Draco more and more with each chapter.
Poor Andromeda and poor little Teddy - it's just not fair it makes sense that Harry and Draco would step up, even if its scary to suddenly be parents to a five year old.
Ch3 - So... poor Andromeda. That's going to bring about some big changes. And now I'm worrying about Mila too! For heaven's sake, stop making me care about characters! SP
You did excellent!! It did catch me off guard finding Draco being trained for a healer! I thought he was going for something to do with potions! I really need to know what happened to Blaise and Vesper, though!!
I'm assuming Ron and Hermione next chapter? I'm liking how you're switching perspectives, I just hope you write lots and lots of chapters!
YAY for smut!
Draco is such a tease - poor Harry.
I just love how your Harry and Draco are together.
Very much looking forward to the next chapter.
Thoroughly enjoying the way this part is starting! I Suppose (lol) I can make myself deal with shorter chapters since you said there will be more. Call me spoiled, I'm okay with that, snort!! Thanx again for carrying on with the story
Kitty5tatts
Sweet, sweet smut!
I was hesitant to say too much in my review for the first chapter simply because multiple POV stories can go sideways so quickly, but it's holding together beautifully. If you can keep the plot line(s) cohesive, this looks like it's going to be one hell of a story! You may not have revealed what the plot is yet, but I truly enjoy your writing style. I can't wait to see where this story takes us!
CH2 - What a cock tease Draco was! Poor Harry! Still, at least it wasn't just teasing. I really want to know what happened with Ves and Blaise, but no doubt I will have to wait *long suffering sigh - like I've nver made you wait for answers in my stories(!)*. Lovely stuff! And looking forward to Vesper kicking some bratty boys' asses! SP
Ahh the first chapter was amazing!! I just wish it wasn't left on a cliffhanger, pure evil!! I'm so curious what happened between Vespa and Blaise! I can't wait for Harry and Draco to be added into the story!♡ Your writing style never ceases to amaze me!
Yay!! I'm so glad for this story to finally be here!!
I'm so happy! i've been waiting for this sequel! you inspired me to start writing my own. This is a very good first chapter. i'm excited to get to know Ves a lot better. Can't wait for harry and draco, but i like how you are focusing on more than just those two. Can't wait for the next chapter! do you know what days you will be updating this story?
I've been so excited for this story! I can't wait to see where you take it!
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