Reviews for One brick at a timeBy : Cheichei87 |
I keep checking back to see if you have added more. No luck. Its a good story. Dont give up on it. Hope you are doing well and its not your health and just writers block that is keeping us from more. :)
Nice. Looking forward to more.
I lige you writing style and look forward to reading more
I love that the Weasly Twins were brought up, although a little disappointed that we didn't fond out his the Weaslys punish cheating. I think I speak for everyone when I say that we need the next chapter now!
Good update. Now I REALLY want the next chapter soon!
'Casual, but got my shit together' look. Haha. I strive to achieve this look IRL, but somehow fall short.
Can’t wait to see these two get together. It was a fun little chapter.
I am loving the flirty fun of this story, can't wait for the next chapter.
It's so fun to see their flirty interactions. I look forward to the new chapter.
What lines they're crossing... um all of them?! lol I am enjoying their flirtations immensely and look forward to the dam of tension breaking. :-) Thank you, HG4eva
Really cute so far
excellent shower scene!
I get the feeling that, in the words of the old Lee Greenwood song, "And when we touch, baby don't you know; it won't be touch and go, it's gonna be touch and go crazy."
^_^
I personally like the direction. Can never go wrong with Dramione action! Now, will they be teammates or rivals at trivia night?
I am glad she's getting some of her backbone on and letting herself grow. She's not the old Hermione, and she needs to learn who the new one is, without putting restraints on herself. I love it! I also like that Draco defended her, and then ogled her. lol Thanks! HG4eva
I’m quite enjoying this story. Yes to Dramione flirting!
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