Reviews for Book One - Master Mine: A Lesson in SubmissionBy : Lissa & snowblind12 |
I found this story just to have something to wank too. Now it's been three weeks and I have cried more than I have come but I have zero regrets, this story is amazing. I do hope they go the poly route in the end and that threesomes will be coming more and more!
I love that Hermione maintains a good relationship with her Gryffindore friends and her interactions with them are just adorable.
Will need a naked Lucius in my bed at all times. Great writing!! Thank you for all the work!
I just wanted to tell you how much I loved this! You made me laugh, you made me cry, and I finished it crying. I haven't been able to pull up any of your artwork for this story however. There aren't any pics on FB or tumblr. Well except the profile pics on FB. Will be waiting anxiously for the next Master Mine.
Hello Girls!
I just finished this story and I don't know what to say! So much happened...
I still love your writing and the charakter development during the chapters.
I can't wait for the second part. It's really amazing ^^
The only problem is ... I don't know which couple I want... First I defenitely thought Severus and Hermione but then I thought that she fits with Lucius too ....
I am really excited how this is going on ... Maybe the baby is not even Severus and she just asks him for help or something like that ...
Greetings from Germany
Sincerely yours
LittleStranger
Ugh. All the feels! Such an emotionally draining chapter. And poor Severus just never can get his happy ending, can he? I cannot wait to see where this story goes in the next books!
Ugh. All the feels! Such an emotionally draining chapter. And poor Severus just never can get his happy ending, can he? I cannot wait to see where this story goes in the next books!
The scene was sooo perfect!! Then you guys had to make me cry! I’m so heartbroken for Lucius!! 😭😭
I loved most of this chapter : the introduction of them as a couple to the Weasleys, Charlie, and that they have reached a new level in their relationship. I'm also interested to see what comes of the forgotten journal entry!
What kind of ruined it for me was when Hermione discusses her discomfort with having sex while on her period, and Snape's response is simply that she will not say no to him once he is her Master.
With that kind of disrespect for her boundaries, she should just stick with Lucius.
I am so in love with this story!
The journal 😬😬!! I’d forgotten all about it!! Omg, she’s going to be in sooo much trouble!!
Omg!!!
finally they mad love!!! 😍😍😍
it was such an amazing chapter.
You just mad my day perfect. Thank you soo much.
Please keep going its so good i cant get enough.
She finally got her anal and plenty of it! I enjoyed this side of Lucius shining through. The family get together was a very nice addition and the thought of getting Severus in the middle of that is going to be a riot! 😂 can’t wait!!
Still loving this story so much! I love that you introduced the existence of triads, as well. I'm torn between wanting this to end up Snape/Hermione, or a triad, as both outcomes have their benefits and obstacles. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Omg you will bring even more!! 🎊You made me so happy!! I cant wait to read more and see where it goes. Im totally Snape getting her. So pleeeeeeease let it be him! 😚🤗
First of all, I love this story. It is one of the few healthy BDSM relationships stories that I have ever gotten into. I usually go for things a little darker, but this one is great at being sexy and fluffy!
So I would like to add that I feel that it should end as a triad fic where both Lulu and Sev get to keep the witch and share her equally. If anyone could do it, it's them. Cause even though I think Hermione *thinks* she could give up Dom Lulu after their contract is done, I don't think it is going to be that easy.
I have to admit to skipping the scene with the other chick, but I understood that it further cemented Severus’ feelings. Poor Lucius.... as far as your nephew, I’m extremely glad to hear things were easier than expected! I hope that his recovery is over quickly!
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