Reviews for Book One - Master Mine: A Lesson in SubmissionBy : Lissa & snowblind12 |
That was freaking excellent. I loved how, no matter how good Lucius was, she's still missing Master Snape's special touch!
It did live up to my expectations! I'm so excited about this story!
I am enraptured already! D-R is not your only submissive reader, lol. It is very reassuring to those of us that truly live this lifestyle that there are writers that want to provide reading material that strives to be as realistic as it can be in this wonderful alternate universe. The content and the way the two of you are presenting it, fantabulous!!
I have roughly 18 years experience in the lifestyle, if either of you want an extra source to pull from. Let me know and I'll provide my email. Won't be offended if not either, lol
Kitty5tatts
Okay, so I should start by saying there scene was bloody hot. The plot is also developing in well and I for one need that in a story. I am interested to see where it goes and if Severus can get the courage to admit how compatible they are together. I do hope Lucius calls him all his BS but that may just be me!
Pushed off of the stove is RIGHT!! I can't wait for Lucius to realize just how Wrong he is!!!
Oo! Silly Severus, he just set himself up for a fight, didn't he? And Lucius, falling into the same old misinderstanding; a woman who's dominate in her vanilla life can't be submissive! Bwahahaha, I look forward to seeing Hermione put him in his place...or be put in her place, as the case may be, lol. I'm too excited for the next chapter, please don't tease me too long!
So this is a really interesting story so far. I like how you are depicting each of the characters and I love how Hermione is open and free to explore this newly discovered part of herself.
Oh wow. That chapter stood up the the anticipation, and I don't get to say that often about stories involving the lifestyle! While part of me is disappointed that there wasn't a lemon in this chapter (the state of my knickers is a testament to that part), another part is thrilled because one: it means plotline in what looks to be a captivating story (looks to be, pfsh, IS) and two: you're providing us with a dominate who has limits and guidelines he holds himself to, which is hard to find in real life, nonetheless a fictional story when rainbows and butterflies can pop out of the woodwork to turn what should be an abusisive situation into happily ever after.
Thank you for your determination to stay true to the lifestyle. I've been a submissive of one degree or another for about 10 years with the same Dominate. We even work with a online group to try and educate those interested in the lifestyle to keep everyone safe, sane, and consentual. If you cross a line, I will let you know. But at the same time, part of the joy of fiction is that it doesn't always have to aline with reality, lol. I can't wait for chapter 4!
You had me glued to my phone instead of my online homework!! I'm loving it!
Wow!! She hasn't even seen the playroom yet! That's a Gryffindor :)
Dominant Hib is reminiscing... I was the first top for a lot of new people.
Tricky tricky, teasing me like that, lol! I can't wait for the next chapter
This looks like it could be an awesome story, I can't wait to see what you do next! And kudos on addressing the initial "oh shit, what's wrong with me?!" Moment most people have when they first discover that bdsm and D/s trip their trigger.
Nice. Poor Hermione. What a dismal sexual history. I wonder if there is anyone out there who can satisfy her. 😉 Looking forward to the next chapter.
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