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Reviews for His Suffocating Presence

By : TheHuntress
  • From ANON - Koi on September 30, 2017

    This is a very interesting story, however if you coould elaborate more to provide a plot or a sense of direction as to where this story is head; that would be great. The story seems a bit rushed. No offense, but there are thing that are taking place in the story that i'm finding hard to understand. For instance, why is Draco sexually attracted to the very thing that he depises in a sense; a mudbood? Why would Hermione hesitate to spoke to her best friends about Draco's sexual violation, when Harry and Ron's enemy is Draco? I don't mind to discourage you from writing this fic, because as I said before this is truly an interesting fic, just rushed. Can't wait until the next chapter. 


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  • From silverlight on September 23, 2017

    This has been an interesting read so far. I hope you continue. 

    Can't wait to find out where you are planning on going with this. Whether it will stay as dark, possibly get even darker, or you are planning to go into another direction entirely.

    I'm kind of a sucker for a dark!Draco... ;)


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