Reviews for Master of the SensesBy : shsa0702 |
awesome story - hope you update soon
So amazing so far! You have a real talent for creating a scene. Extremely well done, very much looking forward to update!! Terrific job!
Rawr. So utterly infuriating and yet so blissfully logical. You've done a fine job of assembling a rather brilliant story here. It's delicious. And the way he is tantrically exposing her to things...delish. Do pen us some more sooner rather than later. When they finally get down to it, I can only imagine how exquisite it will be. You've characterized them both exceedingly well. Great work!
Hi! I loved your story so far! The rythm is good, and the fluidity too. Good job, can't wait for the next chapter!
Well, I must say that for my first fanfiction read, I've really gotten a jolt. Love your style... Enough story with the *ahem* to pique the senses! I can only imagine how much poorly written stuff is out there from horny kids, and you're not that obviusly, and neither am I.
I hope your summer was a good one... So when might I find your next chapter?!
Oh my....so engagingly sensual with believable characterization of snape to boot! Purrrr....
That. Was. Hot.
But I still feel like Severus is hiding something.
Hmmmm.
What did I think? I think I need more and soon! lol I just read all 7 chapters and I have enjoyed every word! This Severus is lovely in his honesty and more opne personality. I hope she doesn't sprain her wrist before the weekend. lol Thank you! HG4eva
Am so loving this story!! Glad you have some time off to rest and recognize, and get in a little writing to hopefully! Thank you for this wonderful tale
Kitty5tatts
Nice and...hot.
Such an amazing fanfic ! Can't wait to read what will happen next :) Concerning Snape, I think he is quite unseated about Hermione's behaviour...
I just found this story since I'm very rarely on this site but frequent other fiction sites more but I'm glad I came around! Such an interesting premise to teach isolating the senses like that. I'm quite interested in what Snape is thinking. I can really see it going either way: he either thinks she's crazy or us secretly harboring some feelings himself. I hope you find time to update soon!
Oh, gods. I can't wait to read what happens next. I think Snape is definitely hiding his feelings. It's like he's fighting it, but who knows. Awesome chapter!
Please don't abandon such a good story :(
Will there be an update anytime soon?
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