Reviews for After The WarBy : BiGayBoy |
Well I'm intrigued, please update chapter 5 soon.
I don't normally review. I just read, but since there is a lack of reviews, I wanted to let you know that I am reading and following along. There are those of us like me who don' review but would like to read until the end. The first chapter was kind of off putting as it seemed right out of the movie, but then it ended interestingly. I do agree it was necessary to at least show that Draco gave his wand over. It has gotten better. I think it was a bit fast to be fucking for them. I like original touches like the green cloth Draco had. I like nearly all harry draco stories, with the exception of the writing style of the harco story and overusage of the word thaumic. I'm very easy to please and wish you would continue your story. I'm not sure why but on my cell the words run off the page and I have to minimize it and it's harder to read. Not sure why it happens or how to fix it though.
very interesting start !!! lets see were you take it ,waiting for more :):)
I’m very curious to see where you take this story, and I know you meant to quote the movie, but you also said that Remus grabbed Ginny. So: is he alive or dead in this story?
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