Reviews for Mudbloods at HogwartsBy : Gandalfs-Beard |
Great details, makes it really easy to visualize too, plus, the genderbending and rough handling of my favorite characters is a turn on too. I hope Sirius and remus give in to temptation and start using those two.
OMG I LOVED THAT CHAPTER! SUPER CUTE ENDING
Ahhh got my fix
I need an update. I'm dying over here
Definitely has its twisted moments, but balances it well with an actual story under/behind all of it. I will say it has much darker tone than anything else I have read by this author, but that isn't a bad thing. Honestly, it is nice seeing something so different from what they normally write, as they are trying to push themselves into areas they don't usually mess with, allowing them to expand and become that much better. It is certainly one hell of a ride, and fantastic for those times that the lighter/mushier romances aren't what you are looking for. Don't misunderstand, there is (at least one) real romances throughout, but it is definitely tempered by plenty to sate any appetite for more sadistic fare. Thank you to the author for the work you have put into this story so far, and I am looking forward to seeing just where it winds up going.
(Side note - For inspiration regarding certain characters punishments being discussed... Google the artists Whizzer Black, and Kami Tora... May find something that appeals.)
So Draco obviously has not learned his lesson. Didn't anyone get some pictures of him and the trolls? A little blackmail material to keep him in line? Those girls need a little Slytherin cunning if they want to win this conflict. It was nice to see a new chapter. Thanks for writing!
No pressure but I'm dying for a new chapter :'(
Favorite chapter!!
So many nasty, fucked up fetishes... I must say that I really enjoy reading your fic, waiting for the new horrid and perverted things done to our poor innocent muggleborns))
Yeah, that sort of things is my guilty pleasure, and I've read a ton of weird and kinky stuff - but your dark and wild imagination surprised even me. Good work, I'm looking forward to upcoming lewd adventures of Hermione, Harriet, Katie and Sophie and anyone else in your version of the wizarding world.
By the way... If this does not contradict your plans, could you add more watersports and scat themes?
Too much focus on Hogwarts.
I saw your explaination. I just think that the ministry is lacking in their skills in the scope of what they should be doing. These recepticles are just disappearing. Not going to school and coming home for the summer. The ministry and wizards in general think they can do what they please, but you just can't believe they can obliviate that many people. They are going to miss someone and questions will be asked.
Unless they came up with a spell that worked on all the muggles to make them forget and even then, there is going to be someone's squib relative that it won't work on.
Murphy's law states that if something can go wrong, it will go wrong. It is an undeniable fact.
I love what you did at the Weasley family home. Ginny getting involved is such a great addition to the story. I am going to love reading what they come up with for the twins and Percy's punishment.
Thanks for writing and I hope to see another update soon.
So how does this Grande Bargain account for the missing muggle born every year? These children go missing and never show up in the muggle world ever again? Their parents just tell everyone they are at a private school and never have a break? They are completly forgotten? They can't be forgetten by everyone.! Friends, relatives, parents, former teachers etc. Someone has to be missing them.
With everyone being so complacent, Sirius is going to have to put together an underground army to combat this Grand Bargain. Their big mistake was forcing Harry into being a Recepticale.
Any chance they are going to find out that the Headmaster was having sex with the students before it became legal? Anyone with that kind of fetish has to had 'slipped up' prior to the 'Grand Bargain' that gave him an 'out' that allowed him to 'partake in his pleasures'.
Okay, nice chapter. So now I am wondering if Snape or someone else came up with a spell or potion that confunded the general population and just some of them were amune or didn't get it? is that why most everyone got on board with this (except a few) at first, or was it something else? I mean Amelia Bones quit and hasn't persued a career, Fudge isn't into it even after ALL this time even being minister there must be other but not many. They must be allergic to the delivery focus or they didn't get it for some other reason. ie it was a potion that was put into every deliver of basil and Malfoy Industries controls all aspests of sales and imports so makes sure that it is processed in the potion as a cleaning agent, but Fudge is allergic to it.
I only use that because it is a very uncommon allergy and I happen to be allergic to it. Just as an example. I just can't imagine ANYONE being OK with this otherwise! So there has to be a reason.
Really good chapter BTW. Good work with Ron, I think he really got the idea. I hope you do something as equally well with the other boys.
I was starting to get worried. O no! Katie bell .I love her. Weasleys are assholes
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