Reviews for Jonquils and LightningBy : Lomonaaeren |
This so exciting!!! I love it. I kind of wonder if we get to find out what happened to the Harry in Tom world. I assume he is still a small child unless he was never born in that world or hasn't bern born just yet.
Lol this made me think of the gingerbread man. Run run as fast as you can you can't catch me I'm the gingerbread man! Harry is running so he's a gingerbread man but Tom is the wolf that's going to gobble him up!
I will give it to Tom, he is persistant, if nothing else. I wasn't expecting the sympatico magic. That's a bonus. Nice addition. Thanks for the update.
Lol that was so funny when Tom said he'd be fighting for the rights of muggleborns and half bloods. And after finding out what a touch is like Tom is going to chase Harry till he catches him! Haven't figured out if it's a war that's happening or a war Tom wants. Political power would make more sense to change things but if he's shut out of politics as well as all half bloods and muggleborns then taking over would make sense. Dumbledore must be more than headmaster. Looking forward to more :)
I am really enjoying this story, it's very different and I look forward to seeing more of it. Thanks for sharing. I can't hlep but wonder what Gaunt is really up to? Why does he really need a Potter?
Harry won't want to help someone evil. Hopefully Riddle isn't evil yet and is willing to change his methods of getting his goals accomplished or he will be doomed for disappointment.
Very intriguing, can’t wait to see what gonna happen in chapter 3, and more so with Harry and Tom.
Made my mouth water!! Am very excited to see how this story progresses. Thank you for something to look forward to
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