Reviews for Convincing Stark *COMPLETE*By : Talented_Mrs_Lupin |
I'm going to start reading the second one now just wanted to say LOVEING IT! ! !
This whole chapter was FANTASTIC! Lol
I am sorry this story is complete, but look forward to the sequal so I can see Hermione squash the Malfoy empire. Well, perhaps not squash it, but at least not excell in this area and not make any more money from something that was basically Hermione's idea in the first place. I do feel sort of bad about Draco though, he seemed to really like Hermione. I hope he finds someone else to love.
Brilliant, but you could have told the readers what was whispered!!! Now inquiring minds want to know. Thanks for the update!
I have spent an enjoyable couple of hours with this story today reading all the chapters. It is funny and refreshingly original and witty. I truly appreciate the talent you have expressed. Thank you so much.
Don’t normally do reviews but this is one of the few stories I feel compelled to let you know how much I’m enjoying it and that I really hope you continue this I think it is a brilliant idea and not one I’ve seen before at least not done like this, it’s well written easy to read and thankfully free of bad spelling and grammar which so often plague promising stories. I did feel that the reveal of Hermonies powers to stark and banner was a bit to quick and rushed but It didn’t spoil the story so not a major issue
I am loving this story so far. Keep going and please do not stop.
-voldemortsgirl
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