Reviews for The big bad and the wolf *Completed*By : Kvarta |
This was kind of a sudden ending to the story in my opinion, but nonetheless this was a pretty decent story. Definately not my usual fare, but it was enjoyable. keep up the writing- you will only improve from here!
His actions really do/did speak louder than his words, as awful as they could be. :) I absolutely LOVED the way this ended. I would love more, of course, but they are sweet together in their own way and I am glad he'll get custody. Severus certainly manipulated them all. Ha.
Happy writing!
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Oh, I cannot wait to see what that does to Severus' plans. I wonder if Severus will put that together with Remus getting "handsy" as I believe he put it. At least Remus has an excuse to get out of the house. A Snape without coffee is not a Snape I want to meet. lol Happy writing!
I keep wanting them to have a conversation despite how OOC that would have been. lol. I cannot wait to see how they react when they realize what is really going on. I cannot wait to read more!
Oh Severus, if only you truly knew the real reason why Remus is so uncomfortable around a half naked you....😈muahahahaha
please update chapter 5 soon.
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