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Reviews for 1912 Present meet Past *UNDER CONSTRUCTION*

By : Luckycharms
  • From saxman66 on September 22, 2018

    Well I was wondering why there was food in the house and clothing etc but no sign of anyone present but that moving from place to place fixed that. ;)

     

      They have found both stones, or possibly their earlier versions but I'm rather surprised that Hermione hasn't twigged where she's heard of the Titanic before given its notoriety.  Draco possibly given his families obsession with being isolated from the muggle world, despite the fact it was the cause of a family tragedy, but Hermione should know. Although I wonder if one effect of them being in the past is that the Malfoy's don't end up sailing on it?

     


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  • From theflamingdictator on September 22, 2018

    What can I say... I truly love it! I've read it all in one sitting. I just couldn't stop reading it. You've managed to keep a reader captivated for each and every moment of the story. A fine accomplishment that few can ever hope to achieve. What's even more amazing is that you've managed to write an interesting story with interesting characters that work so good towards their innate characterizations in the original stories. But they are beginning to grow beyond what they started as. Draco and Hermione still have their innate personalities, and fiestieniss. But slowly and surely they are growing as people trough the events you've created for us. They are interesting, likeable and you've made me wanting to read more about them. Just amazing. Bloody amazing. 


    I can't wait to read about what happens next. How they manage to fit in... What they are going to to once they realize what a ship named Titanic implies... How they are going to grow as people... What obstacles they have to overcome... 

     

    I can also truly feel the growing attraction they have for each other. Can't wait for the buildup, the tension, rocky patches and (considering this site) the steamy sexy and sweet stuff that we all love and hold dear for our dearly duo.

     

    You are an amazing writer and you have a fan in me for what ever you have in store for us. A true great writer can, with his words, create a visual image in the readers' mind that gets the readers to fully emphatise, and engulf themselves in the story and events. And you succeeded admirably in this. From the first to the last word, I am on the tip of my seat. I truly can't wait to read the rest.


    Whatever happens in the future, know this; you are a great storyteller.


    Sincerely,

     

    theflamingdictator


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  • From Annecia89 on September 21, 2018

    Omg!! I need to know what happens next right now!! Who caught them: a maid or Lady Malfoy, herself?? 🧐🧐


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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2018

    very good so far.  

    one minor nitpick re chapter 5: hermione got the time-turner in THIRD year, not fourth.


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  • From RainChaser on September 19, 2018

    Hey, I love it so far! I'm interested to see where it goes 😀


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  • From Annecia89 on September 18, 2018

    I am in love!! I love the premise and I cannot wait to see where you are going to take them!! 


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  • From saxman66 on September 16, 2018

      Interesting idea and going to be intriguing how they handle 1912, let alone being stranded with each other.  Looking forward to seeing more.

     

      One typo in chap 2 where you misspell Dean as Dead if its possible for you to change it.


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