Reviews for Ginny Weasley - Porn Star!By : ODB |
Perfect vision for Ginny in this story: Ella Hughes.
Good finale to the story. I like the way Harry's hiding the secret and the fact he knows what she's been doing. [Fortunately he hasn't got to me so I've still got a couple of her videos. ;)] A bit surprised that she isn't wondering why he doesn't seem surprised that she's no longer a virgin and seems pretty accomplished in the bedroom.
Well all good things must come to an end. Enjoyed the story and as I say the jokes have been as entertaining as the sex. You gave Ginny some great lines. If you do a sequel I would definitely like to read it, although not sure what the plot would be.
Also good you got a decent way out for Lucy.
Just wanted to tell you how much I’ve enjoyed this story (created a profile just so I could review it).
One thing you’ve done that I particularly liked was using other characters to talk about and show the perils of the industry, particularly Lucy and Sam. I’ll probably come back and do a more comprehensive review later.
Damn it. This story definitely needs filming. It would not only be hot but bloody funny as well. That exchange at the start of Ginny's scene with Lucy was hilarious. I love the little lines you come up with for her.
Its a pity that the next chapter will be the last as its been very good and I'll definitely miss it. Can't I persuade you to do say just a couple of hundred more? ;)
Has Ginny told Sam she's planning to pack in soon, although she might have guess from Ginny's burst of activity?
Well I had a bad feeling about that job and glad that they all escaped unharmed. Pity Kohn and his cronies wouldn't suffer more than a small period of confusion.
Sounds like its going to be a catalyst for Ginny to move on although since her new fake identity is presumably the one she's been using for her porn work that isn't without risk. Especially if Kohn hold's a grudge and it sounds like he's the sort of slimy little vermin that would. He might try even now as one of the threats he made was that the other three wouldn't get away if she didn't do what they wanted. True he would be stupid to do so but he sounds like the sort of over-privileged idiot that won't accept defeat easily.
However I have a sneaky feeling that those 4 spells are going to change things as I suspect an Auror will probably be investigating the incident. ;)
Rather hope that Ginny and Lucy don't play that trick on Sam. She might find it funny and laugh it off but especially after this last incident Ginny realises how lucky she's been and having a stupid joke hanging over their relationship won't help. Plus its simply bad manners to someone who's treated her so well.
Anyway only two chapters to go. :(
Interesting presentation of the monotony of the porn industry when your working in it regularly although Ginny is being careful and so far probably a bit lucky. Good that while she's enjoying her work she's not forgetting her aim to get out ASAP. Although since she can't really live off the money she's made for the rest of her life has she started things what she would do in terms of income when she does pack in the porn?
I have a feeling about that banking job that something nasty is going to happen or be in the air but have to see how things turn out. Ditto with the gangbang work that Dan suggested although it might be safer since he seems to know the right people. Also liked the banter between the three of them before and during the shoot. :)
Must admit a bit disappointed that there's only three more chapters to come as its been a very good read, but nothing last forever. :(
I think there was an hint that she will see Harry again at the end of the story so interesting to see how things develop there.
Good chapter and hints at some of the nasty side of the porn business, although keeping Ginny safely out of it.
I can foresee one problem with the idea of Ginny only having a short porn career in that she's enjoying it far too much. ;) Although she's been very lucky in how she's been protected so far and hasn't see the nasty or even boring sides as Lucy has for instance.
Also think she's being presumptive in assuming that no wizards know how to use a DVD player. Probably at least a few who do or who have muggle friends that definitely do. After all I think your hinted she's going to run into one mage at some point. ;)
In terms of replying to reviews I'm fairly new to the site as well but another story the writer is replying the same way as you making a comment at the start of a chapter. Note however, looking through the FAQ a few days back it said your not allowed to use an entire chapter simply to reply to reviews. There is another option, under Forms – FAQs – Forum FAQs there is a description of how to set up a review reply thread, although that's probably only necessary if there's a lot of reviews. Suspect that's not necessary unless you get a lot of reviews and want to reply to them all. Hope that helps.
Absolutely loving this story so far, great writing and development along with great smut. I hope you can keep updating at this speed too!
Been enjoying the 1st couple of chapters but that 3rd one was great. That's a porn film I would love to see. :D
Ginny has been lucky in terms of who she's meet up with and the fact she's finding she enjoys a lot of it. Hopefully not too much as that could be a problem later on.
Did wonder with what Sam was saying and the speed with which things were developing that Lucy might be a problem becoming jealous but fortunately she seems to be aware of that problem and more concerned about her friend.
Looking forward to seeing her further adventures. ;)
Know this is fiction but Ginny has an advantage being a witch in terms of protecting against pregnancy. Hope she's also aware and knows a spell to protect against SDIs as there doesn't seem to have been anything mentioned about either issue so far despite Sam's concerns for her girls welfare.
PS – would agree with the other reviewer that its good to see the story with plot development rather than simple smut. :)
Honestly, coming into this, I didn't think this would be as detailed and well written as it is. I can't wait to read more from you and would love to see Ginny learn and grow more into the story! Also just a question, will she date anyone in the series? A customer? A friend who doesn't know?
hmmmmmmmmmmm lmao anyway until next time!
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