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Reviews for Earth Shattering

By : Luckycharms
  • From saxman66 on November 27, 2018

    No sex at all sounds rather frustrating, both for readers and the two central characters ;) but could still be a good story.

     

    Does Hermione's sudden revival have something to do with a magic bond between them? Rather like the way Draco is reviewing what they were saying to each other and seeing the conversation in a new light as he thinks about it again.


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  • From saxman66 on November 25, 2018

    Well that's got them both in a bad way but especially Hermione. Still she's made the step to declaring an interest.


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  • From D_elliot on November 25, 2018

    I'm literally crying soooooo hard. This is amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the AMAZING work PLEASE!!!! 


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  • From theflamingdictator on November 24, 2018

    Once again a true masterpiece for all intents and purposes. You manage to check all the boxes for what makes a Draco/Hermione story truly great, and what seperates it from most others.

    Draco and Hermione act like Draco and Hermione. Draco oozes high power eliteism, with a cocky undertone. He shows you who's boss, escpeccially in his dealings with those who anger him (ie Tate). Hermione is still her usual strong willed and bright self. She truly knows what to do in a crisis. 

    Perfect paceing. Most other stories have them profess their undying love for each other and before you know it the pants and knickers come of. But your story is perfectly paced. Slowly but surely their feelings come to the foreground, brougt on by traumatic events over a good long period of time.

    As for the steamy and sexy bits. Not that there have been any explicit things happening (obviously when you think about it... Who wants to get it on in a collapsing building...) But the most simple act of touching a hand or caressing a cheek for a little while longer than neccesary. The way you set the scene, the event, the feelings of the characters. I can truly 'feel' the growing affection the have for each other. And that is just great. To be able to convey those feelings is true gift that not that many have.

    I can't wait to read more.

     

    With kind regards,

     

    The Flaming Dictator

     

     


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  • From saxman66 on November 24, 2018

    Well their actually starting to get friendly, nothing like being in peril of your lives to make people change their perceptions of others. Pity they could save either of the two people they came across but still got some way to go to escape themselves.

     

    Had forgotten about that tornado but two was sounding suspicious. However if its just a twist and no darker elements at work that would remove on problem.


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  • From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2018

    LOL, what is it with you and disasters?


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  • From Dracona63 on November 20, 2018

    Ahh another great work in the make. I loved the story 1912 Present Meet Past, so I cannot wait until I see how this one turns out! You are very gifted in writing and I'm already hooked on this one as well!


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  • From saxman66 on November 20, 2018

    Ah well you obviously like this pairing. ;)

     

    Given that Birmingham is famous for being in Britain's tornado ally [NOT!] and the building has been hit by two within a very short space of time I'm suspecting foul play.  Looking forward to finding out more.

     

     


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