Reviews for Just Another Day in ParadiseBy : goddess-of_dragons |
I loved the chapter so much. I am happy that you finally posted a new chapter. Your story is my escape from the crap going on in my life. I hope everything is still good with your family. I am happy that Hermione's mother and father are still giving Draco a chance to prove himself that he is better. Never thought that the purebloods are in for for a big change starting with Pansy's mother. I can't wait for more of the story. Keep on posting you are doing a great job.
I'm really glad you took the time to show this conversation between Draco and Hermione's dad. Sometimes we need some good character and relationship development rather than plot, and I thought it was really well done. I like that Mr. Granger is warming to Draco whereas Mrs. Granger is still skeptical. It feels realistic and establishes some good tension that could be explored later.
I'm so sorry to hear that there have been so many challenges lately! It's impressive that you're even still writing with all that going on, so you really should give yourself a pat on the back, and some leeway to handle those real-life things when you need to. I'm in a similar boat, not to the extent that you are, of course. Work has just kept me busy and I feel so behind on my writing!
It's very frustrating that this site doesn't have a way for users to personal message each other. It would be very convenient, wouldn't it? I would have been happy to help, although I think your plan of going back through writing you like and see how it's done is a really good one. I do that a lot to get inspiration or figure out how to write a scene. Unfortunately, the other site I post on doesn't having PMing either. I try to keep my real identity and my fanfic identity separate, for many reasons, and so don't give out my email address here. But I have considered creating a separate, anonymous email for my Thunderbird stuff, in case people want to chat with me. I haven't decided if it's a good idea or not, but if I do end up doing it I will certainly let you know! <3333
How could I give up on you? Your story is what keeps me sane. I feel ya on the life taking a dump on ya. Life has done that to me. But I have been checking everyday to see of you have posted. You have out done yourself with this chapter. I hope that Hermione's mom warms up to Draco soon. I know how Draco is feeling with one person out of Hermione's family liking him and the other not so much. But I know I will have to wait until the next chapter to read to find out what happens next. Hopefully we will find out about who sent the letters to them. I still have the theory that it was Patrick that sent them. I hope that your grandma feels better.
No need to apologize for taking some extra time to finish the chapters, or for stretching the plot over the chapters that it needs to stretch. This is your story, hun, and we'll be there for it as you keep working on it!
Hermione's parents seemed to take things in stride, which I'm glad for. Though I am anxious to see Hermione's reaction, I also am liking that Draco is getting a chance to know them on his own. Hopefully they will approve despite his past. I have a feeling once they see Draco and Hermione together, and how much they love each other, they will be supportive :)
Looks like it's shaping up to be a fun holiday for everyone! Can't wait to see what happens next! <3
I loved this chapter alot. I am happy that they have Hermione's parents with them. I hope that her parents accept Draco for who he is now and not judge him for who he was. I hope Hermione doesn't get mad at Draco for not telling her what he was doing. You always have me waiting for the next chapter on the edge of my seat. I shall be waiting for the next chapter like a good girl. You keep me guessing on what will happen next. I thought they would demand for Draco to be hexed by someone
Oh my gosh! You are so sweet to say all that you did. I am very happy to have inspired you and to still be a favorite writer of yours! It means a lot.
This chapter was interesting. I'm really curious about what happened to Patrick, and even more so about how Hermione is going to react when she learns about her parents! So many poossibilities here! Can't wait for the next chapter <3
Yes that was fast of you posting the chapter. I am glad that Hermione's parents have their memories back. I hope that they accept Draco being with her. I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. I shall be waiting as patiently as possible. You truly out done yourself with each chapter. I though it has me thinking with Patrick disappearing like he did makes him look guilty of writing that threatening letter to Draco. But I will be waiting to see if I am right.
Loved the latest chapter honey. You have out done yourself with the end of the date. Waiting for the next chapter on the edge of my seat. Please post as quickly as possible. I am chomping at the bits waiting for it. This story is my drug in a positive way.
What a wonderfully smutty chapter lol! I'm glad Hermione decided to "punish" Draco in a way that they would both enjoy. Like Hermione sort of pointed out, when sex deprivation is the punishment, everybody loses :) I also love how sweet they are with each other, even in these kinkier moments. No cruelty or mind games. (Just sex games!) I think that's so important. It was nice to have this little reprieve with them but I am also looking forward to seeing how the plot progresses.
I really appreciated getting your review of the ASE Extras (so much!) but I felt bad after reading it because the last thing I want is for you to think I'm mad at you! I didn't mind at all that their date had some resemblance to one from ASE, in terms of location anyway. I thought it was sweet, and if I was the one to inspire it then I'm honored. The way I see it, writers inspire each other all the time. You made this date unique and your own with your writing, even if the location had been similar to mine. If you are more comfortable with it being changed to Greece then by all means keep it that way. But there is no need to change it for my sake, I promise <3
I've been so distracted with work I haven't had a chance to read lately and I felt so spoiled to get two chapters of this! You're on a roll hun!
I loved their date. Very romantic <3 I couldn't help but think of Harry and Draco's date on the Tuscan balcony in ASE. It's hands down one of my favorite settings :) I liked that they got a chance to continue their questions game and how personal they were able to get. I hope Hermione forgives Draco fully soon. I know he had a bit of a freak out but the boy is too damn sweet and he deserves some love haha ;)
Still very curious as to how the dream will play out and what Draco is going to end up doing about Hermione's parents. But I'm also glad these two are just getting some time to themselves to reconnect. They deserve it.
Keep up the good work! <3
Wow I could picture the date in my mind. You have truly out done yourself this time. I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to know how the date ends. You have me on the edge of my seat. I am happy that they are going to stay together. I am worried about Hermione's parents and the letter. I am hoping to fund out more about that soon. I hope there is another update soon
What?!? You have them back together. I have been on the edge of my seat waiting for an update. I was worried you left the story. I am happy that they have worked out the problem and are back together. I am worried that the dream that Hermione is having will be coming true. I don't want any thing to happen to anyone in the story. Please no more long stays away again. I hate wirring that the story will go incomplete. But you have out done yourself again as always. I await on the edge of my seat yet again for more of the story
I'm very glad they made up, obviously, and also that their commmunicarion as a couple is getting better. But this dream Hermione has had got me nervous for what might come next. As for Hermione's parents, I'm torn as to whether Draco's idea is a good one or not. We shall see! Looking ofrward to more and to see the fruits of all the intersesting seeds you have planted! <3
You have yet again out done yourself again with this chapter. I am pleased to see that they are going to work out the problems that have come up this time. It is going to take Draco alot of work to be open with Hermione. I have faith that Draco will not follow in his father's foot steps. Draco's mom is trying to help them the best way she knows how. I am still thinking it is Patrick that sent the death threat to Draco. But then again I think draco's father has a hand in it to. This is a tough one to figure out. I always think I have it figured out and then you throw a new twist in it. I can't wait to read more of the story.
Love this chapter. I am glad that they made up. I hope that they find out who sent the letter to Draco. I really think that it is Patrick that sent the letter to Draco to scare him into leave Hermione. I just want them to find happiness together. I wish that they get married later in the story also.
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