Reviews for A Prince in Lion's ClothingBy : Sablesilverrain |
Can’t wait for chapter 35, hope it’s soon. 😁
Oh, revenge will be so sweet! i cant wait until at least a part of it comes through! That was such a huge leap for harry to trust tom with what happened in his past. Knowing how emotional tom can get when it comes to harry, im surprised how he kept control when everything was said. Keep it up tom! lol... amazing chapters, and looking forward to the next ones! Editing notes:
line startinng with Tom was so shocked...He finally settled on.* *not sure if you meant settled down, but unsure. ...
line starting with “Weak-hearted and weak-willed."... them, won’t me*, My Pretty,... *pretty sure you meant we, not me ....
thats all that i could find in a quick look through, keep up the great work!
It’s nice to see that Harry’s becoming so bold, please update chapter 34 soon.
😂😂 Harry is learning how to tease!!!! Yay for him!
As Dumbledore continues to be an absolute idiot.
WHOA, another chapter so quick! thank you thank you! and a VERY interesting update. i really hate how thick-headed and conniving dumbles is, it gives me so much more reason to hate him. huge props to you! so glad that tom really did his homework to make sure nothing could leak through! hopefully the little slip up dumbles did with fleurs sister will draw some outward looks at his acting. cant wait to see dumbles go down! also glad how like-able you are making tom! this really gives him a different light i diddnt think of before. looking forward to the next!
sorry for not reviewing in so long, its been a really hectic week for me. however i read all of the updates as soon as they come out. all i can say is, very well done, and i am loving the story progression. it was a little awkward i can tell working the twins and draco together, but i think that they will turn out quite fun! keep up the amazing work! with you every step of the way!
Lol tease! Happy my pairing is on the way and they're happily switching sides. Can't wait for the next chapter!
it's all adding up..not looking good for dubbledork...draco and the twin that's HOT!!!! again thanks for the update :):)
The plot thickens! 😂😂 now he knows who his grandparents were. Interesting and unsurprising that he's Lord Gryffindor too.
I about died of shock. Neville being allowed in Severus' rooms! Then having to see that false memory. Poor man.
ok progress ron is gone for now !!!!!!! someone anyone needs to off him now !!! thanks for the update :):):)
I'm loving how often you update! And Luna is great, the whole talking to stones thing was definitely out there but I can't wait to see where you end up going with Neville
Please update chapter 29 soon.
Fucking Dumbledore. What the hell kind of punishment is that? Not that I'm saying anything the characters haven't already. Good thing he's got shadows to save his life right now.
I liked Tom's gift though, looking forward to both their incorporations.
Lol you had Luna talk to the stones in Shiloh! She was a menace for Snape then too! 😂😂 and yay the twin/draco has been set in motion!!!
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