Reviews for MomentumBy : JustAWhat |
Please update this absolute and unquie beauty of Harry Potter cuckold story very soon as I can't wait to see what happens next particualrly in regards to Dean and Ginny and Harry and Ginny as they get near to the wedding.
Hope you get around to updating this story with a new chapter very soon as I absolutely love it and can't wait to see what happens next with regards to Ginny and Deans affair as her upcoming marriage to Harry draw ever closer.
Hot damn, absolutely love this story is one of the best HP cuckold stories that I have ever come across and can’t wait to see what happens next as Dean and Ginny continues their affair as her mother wedding to Harry draws ever nearer. Please update again soon.
"He'll leave me," she whispered, realizing how devastatingly true that was. She knew that even if she begged and pleaded, Harry wasn't the type of guy to easily forgive and forget. He loved with a passion that often took her breath away, and she knew his hatred could easily match it.
That would actually be a fantastic ending, a real breath of fresh air as opposed to what we usually get out of cheating stories. Kind of hoping that's where this one's going to go: plenty of increasingly hot scenes with Dean, toying with the idea of decency (maybe Harry's waiting for her with the wedding planner while Dean's busy smashing Ginny on the hood of the wedding planner's car), the continued slow descent into complete debauchery and then Harry just walks in on Ginny getting fucked at the least opportune time.
Maybe the night of the wedding rehearsal, where Dean's helping her "rehearse" for her wedding night and everything just goes up in flames. Then bam! Consequences, a lot of them and even worse, they're very public. Ginny's finally getting fucked like she feels she deserves but it costs her the man she loves and maybe her reputation.
I like the idea of that, anyways and will hold out hope that it might happen that way or close to it. Otherwise the story's not bad. Dean himself feels kind of generic, but that might just be because of the slightly more vanilla content. That might change with an anal chapter though, so I'll hold off on judging the story too harshly for it.
Hot damn, chapter three was an another gloriously beautiful and sensual stunningly alluring addition to this gem of a story. Ginny is certainly deluding herself with regards to saying that she feels everything, but doesn’t love Dean as a means of excusing her actions as well as allowing for a way of keeping two things separate as what she has with Dean is great sex or so she claims. While she loves Harry is loved by him in return.
Absolutely and utterly loved the magnificent kinky change of pace as Ginny showed Dean just how much of a whore she could be for his benefit as she eagerly engages in hot oral sex and anal fisting of her massively wet gaping pussy. With her responding eagerly and passionately to Dean’s talking dirty to her during his fantastic fucking of her that she can’t get enough of. Seeming to be the straw that breaks the camels back and accept it what is and eager as most Randy bitch in heat to continue affair.
Eagerly looking forward to reading the latest chapter in due course.
Loved the latest instalment of this brillant erotically tantilising and stunningly emotional smuuty love feast of a cuckold story.Find it brillant the dynamic between Ginny and Dean that has been established in the first two chapters, that already Ginny has fallen head over heel in love with Dean and can't do with out him, while stile loving Harry, but not as intensely or as passionately as you does Harry or used to love him.While loved the dominant and passionate alpha male side of Dean that Ginny just can't get enough and uses it to his advantage to have his cake and eat it. Also loved Dean's removing Ginny's engagement ring off of her finger as a possessive gesture of literally claiming her from Harry to all intents and purposes and should only give it back to her, when she accepts that she belongs to him, heart, body and soul, even when she marry's harry and allow him to slide it on her finger as though he is proposing to her as she accepts that in reality that she willbe Ginny Potter, Thomas.
Also given your suggestion of Harry and the rest of his dorn mates meeting up for a drink and a catchup, Harry's stag do and think this would be perfect time for Dean to begin turning Harry into his crossdressing issy boi slut, as staying sober and taking advantage of the others drunken sates, he agrees to make sure drunk, but still with it Harry gets home alright and instead takes him back to his flat to allow him to sleep off hangover and go home in the morning. When in point of fact, transform Harry's clothes in a sexy set of green lingerie, magically removes all his hair below eyesbrows and transfer it to to hair, making it grow long and silky, casts makeup spell to give Harry an appropriate made up and tailored to fit his locks, making him look likea ravn haired goddess, Before using modified imperius spell to make Harry thinks it was all his idea, loves dressing up as a crossdressing sissy boi and learning to service master dean and his cock in any way, shape or form with his slutty holes.
Thanks so very much for writing this brilliant opening chapter of idea postulated by me to you in an earlier review which is very much appreciated and I look forward to seeing where you go from here with it.
Loved how you set the scene in first chapter with regards dean and Ginny sexual reunion and rekindling of desire and love for one another that Ginny is already on her way down the rabbit hole despite her love for Harry.
Think that Dean should already have started process of getting Harry to love being a sissy during stag do, so that when it comes to wedding night it will be easier for Dean to further get him in touch with his feminine sissy side and love being fucked by dean and Ginny as their humilated cross dressing sissy boi.
i hope you write more for this maybe harry and ginny weddy night dean gets ginny pregnant
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