Reviews for Repeat After MeBy : Luckycharms |
Loved the final two chapters and cannot wait for you to write more stories! Well written for sure :)
Man! This was such a sweet, innocent fanfic! I just discovered the story couple of days back and I was so hooked!
The ending was so amazing and the way you wrote it, it felt so real.
Theo's friendship and character was so adorable, he turned out to be my favorite. Though i didn't like how Ron turn out to be, since it's a fiction, I'll give it to you.
The innocence of first love making, damn it was so good, i wish it was a bit more detailed but none the less the awkwardness and innocence suffices.
Thank you for writing this and... Oh man! I'm so much in the euphoria of what I've just read.
Also, I have to mention this. These days, either fanfic writer leave the story in between or they are very inconsistent in their publishing (which can be justified in some cases or other), but you not only completed the story but also were very consistent and on time in publishing the chapters.
It was such a feeling of joy to see the chapter being published on the said promised day.
Regards and best wishes
A happy reader
Duh! I'm an idiot. You gave us a clue last chapter about Sadie having reason to hate Lucius but never considered it as a motive or that Draco rather than Hermione was the target of the sabotage of Hermoine's potion.
Well that answers the main question and sorts a lot out but Draco still has a number of issues to resolve, not to mention finally admitting, to himself and everybody else how he feels about Hermione. The Veritaserum is likely to be pretty useful here however.
A very well constructed story the way your fitted all the pieces of the plot together. :D
Chapter 11:
Honestly can say I didn't see this coming, and yet it makes perfect sense instead of being a DEM. Well done.
Well that was grisly, then when Hermione laid down besides him I wondered if it was the last chapter.
He's learnt a bit more and sounds like he's got one last day to resolve everything. He knows the problems for Neville and Harry/Ginny as well as a lot more about some of his friends. However still unclear who sabotaged Hermione's potion or how to successfully expose assorted issues about Lavender Brown. Possibly also something to resolve with Sadie.
Given the date of the next story and the way how things are going here it sounds like the next chapter may be the last but its been an entertaining ride.
Loved the latest chapter! Keep it up! I do wish that Draco eventually confronts Ron about his jealousy head on too but can understand if he didn't. Would be funny to see ron's mouth gaping like a fish though if he went from confronting him to flat out snogging Hermione senseless LOL
Took all morning to read this........ I LOVE IT!!! An I'm left hangingš¢
Took all morning to read this........ I LOVE IT!!! An I'm left hangingš¢
OMG this is getting hilarious. I'm loving Draco's inner monologues.
BISH GOT WHAT SHE DESURVED!!!!!!
She need s to stay dead
Well he's making progress although the fact he woke up with such a splitting headache suggests he's running out of time – which seems to be confirmed by what Neville told him about his own time loop. Good little twist there. :) Only concern is how much worse is he going to be tomorrow? - At least I hope the headache is due to his deteriorating condition rather than a carry through from his being knocked out the previous day as how the hell is he going to feel after dying! Unless partially solving the problem by helping Harry and to a degree Neville and Ron eases the pressure somewhat?
So as well as helping Harry and Ginny with her secret – I'm surprised that Harry wasn't more suspicious about how Draco knew or simply assumed he was lying to make mischief – he needs to help Neville and also help Ron finding out he's been betrayed without Ron then exploding and fouling everything up. [You really don't like Ron do you. ;)] Plus helping Hermione by finding out who and how her potion is being sabotaged and both of them by admitting his feelings about her. With possibly only 2-3 days left. Easy peasy, not I fear.
Very good to hear it sounds like your feeling somewhat better about your loss. If writing helps by distracting you I'm definitely glad to read. It takes a while for the pain to ease and its different for different people but over time you will feel better.
Well that was going reasonably well until the last bit. There's going to be one very angry Draco when he wakes up again as a hell of a lot of progress has been made but now he's going to have to persuade all those people again!! Although some of the info like where the fluxweed came from and the bet on him and Hermione, which could both be useful in explaining to Slughorn if no one else. Also he now knows how the fluxweed was used to taint Hermione's potion.
Most of all, of course he's finally accepted his feelings for her. Despite knowing she feels similarly about him, being Draco, he's probably still have doubts about talking to her and fumble about rather than come out with it directly to her. Or alternatively possibly be a bit too forward before he has explained things to her.
Neville... my freaking heart, man. I feel sooo bad for poor Draco after how much progress he made this time!
So much information! I love it. I wait every sunday for the next chapter! I cant wait to see what Draco does with all the information he has learned.
Another awesome chapter :D I'm surprised they haven't tried using a Priori Incantatem on everyone in the classroom to see if they could pinpoint the culprit. That would be of course a bit too easy though :P
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