Reviews for The Further Adventures of Ginny WeasleyBy : ODB |
Totally agree with you about the NTR and cuckold request of a previous reviewer as this story is so hot and sensually beguiling and erotically fantastic and filled with all mannner of hot sexual kinks and tropes of a different kind that you don't always see in HP fanfics that it doesn't need another one added to it.
Well, well sher words fail me as to how scintalating awesome and erotically majestic that entire new chapter was from start to finish as you had Ginny and Luna put on a masterclass of show of erotic proportions without sexual equal as put on a perfomance of many acts where literally the sky was and gloriouisly sexually the limit as the blew everyone's minds and cocks with the sheer sensuality, sexuality, lust, desire and pure unadulterated depravity and wantoness of their as they litterally became sex made flesh and succubai of the porn world for whom no act or request was outside their reach or ability to perform to flawless perfection.
Eagerly looking forward toseeing what Fun Harry, Ginny and Luna will have next as Ginny and Luna take the world of porn by storm and magical beauty as threy cast a sexual spell that cannot be rivalled as well as Harry enjoying all the benefits of their new roles as well as maybe getting to star alongside them in a porno or two.
Did not disappoint. Ginny was every bit the dominant, sexy as fuck force that I hoped she would be and I'm also really digging her more exhibitionist kink. Sets some really high hopes for the future where hopefully things get even sluttier.
So this is awesome. I don't think I've ever seen a career in porn written out so thoroughly and so light on the (totally unneeded) melodrama that it usually has in other stories. Here it's just a part of Ginny's past, it's a really hot part of Ginny's past and instead of endangering her relationship with Harry it instead strengthens it since, well, they're both perverts.
Harry a bit more than Ginny but it only adds to the experience. It's only been a chapter and already we have a quick, dirty live stageshow where a birthday boy lost his V-card and then a porno was shot in front of a crowd, with Ginny coming to realize just how much she missed it all.
And Harry? He's busy being turned on as fuck (can't blame him; your descriptions of Ginny do her image wonders and the entire scenario is the kind of fantasy some guys live for) and rightfully harassing her male co-stars. Which also eliminates any unnecessary drama from happening.
Really looking forward to see what Ginny gets up to next, if her scenes vary (like if she does a glory hole/foot fetish/anal/public sex video) and if at any point Harry joins in in some way. So much potential it's crazy.
Speaking of crazy, there's Luna. Who could probably have her own mini-story to offset this one with the kind of choices she makes. But definitely hoping she remains a part of this too (much like I hope there might be other Hogwarts girls eventually joining in on this action).
Another hot chapter. Sounds like Luna/Selene is going to have a new career that she's going to enjoy a lot and Harry is going to be moonlighting as a minder. Bound to be some problems sooner or later and could well be a problem with one or more of the powerful men at the club who want a bit more. Also Ginny's secret is bound to come out sooner or later, if not via Luna's actions and while the wizard world generally seems to ignore events in the muggle world it does seem rather conservative so the news that three of their most prominent members are heavily involved in porn could result in some damage to Harry's career. Especially since I also get the feeling he's going to fancy a staring role at some stage.
Must admit I preferred the more innocent Ginny, nervously finding her way around in the 1st story to the harder version now but that's just me. Also liked the good bits of humour in the events, such as Harry's last comment :) so looking forward to seeing her performing in another film or six of Warren's. :)
Splendid update!
Things are finally looking up, though I think the real drama is still coming. Can't wait to see which of Harry's & Ginny's friends are going to join them next. I personally hope for another couple, but a feww threesomes would be fun too.
The birthday scene and Luna's act were ok, though I would have loved to see a bit more action for Luna. But I doubt that will be the last we see of her, especially if she is going to join Ginny in her new porn adventures.
The threesome for Ginny was sooo hot though. Exactly the sort of dirty smut which makes me check the site several times a day for an update, haha. I wonder if Harry will join in as a male stand-in in some of the porn movies? Either with Ginny/Luna or some of the other women.
Can't wait for the next amazing chapter!
Hot damn, this is another absolutely awesome and erotically brilliant addition to this flawless and utterly exquisite beauty of a uniquely different and exotically kinky Harry.Ginny story. Not all surprised at that the call was from Giny's old porno manager, practically begging her on bended needs to get her out of her mess with the Albanian mafia and of course following on from her threesome with Luna and blacklisting by the Harpies that she had the perrfect partner and willingness to do so as they say when one door closes, another one opens.
Oh my God and be still my beating Heart, the porn scenes from start to finish were utterly incredible and absolutely glorious and gorgeous showstoppers of a porn show that will live long in the memory for all those watching in the audience. As they were treated to an incrediblely wantonly depraved and irresistably alluring carnal feast for the senses. As not only did they have the queen bee of porn return for a special one off guest appearence of three sumpteously whoreish and volupteous stupendous acts, they also got the pleasure of seeing the incredible beautiful and excentricly exotic blonde goddess join in and give them a show as well.
Eagerly looking forward to see what you have in store for us next. As I feel like the birthday boy and Harry after the show is over are about to be given a world shattering climatic sex show and activity that will rock thier world and leave them utterly exhausted by two such sensually sirens and ladies of the night. .
I agree with the latest review. A happy ending for the two would be nice, yet som 'turbulence' along the way might spice up this story even more!
However, in the end it is your story and as such you should write it the way you want! Our reviews are little more than mere suggestions, showcasing our interest in the story!
Great new chapter!
Really loved Ginny and Luna's show, and can't wait for Marvin's birthday gift.
Also, I hadn't expected so many responses to my NTR comment, so I'll clarify: I wasn't actually suggesting some lasting betrayal or a bad ending to the story. I'd really like if Harry and Ginny won and were happy together in the end, I just find it more satisfying if they suffer a bit on the way. So Ginny being actually blackmailed into sex and loving it more than she'd expect is right up my alley. Yeah, I'm sadistic like that.
Anyway, it was only a silly suggestion based on my twisted preferences, write the story you want to tell of course =) I'm sure it will be great anyway.
Well that was HOT! Your mind is both filthy and very funny. :D I'm rather surprised that Ginny was so willing to return to her career, despite her exhibitionism. Especially since I thought that Harry had done some mind control to make a number of people, including Sam forget about her? However sounds like she had got herself in a mess and good that Ginny could help out.
Once Sam asked for a 2nd girl I felt it would be Luna, although she could probably have come up with a more inventive name. Sounds like Selene could have a new career in porn although Sam might have some problems getting a consistent performance out of her.
Its very handy having a master magician to help with the props, although given how much filming was going on he would have to be careful making them appear and disappear. Mind you given the modern availability of mobiles and the fact the bloke owning the place is likely to be making that film for his own profit I get the feeling that a lot of people are going to see the two girls in a lot of detail. Which could be a problem if one of them, let alone both, are identified by the wrong person.
I wonder if the final stage of this performance will go without problems. Will Mr Warton try and get too hands on or will the club owner want to get some control over such a valuable pair of assets? Harry seems to have done a good job impressing Hajro but people like that with the sight of a good profit can do foolish things, especially since he won't realise how foolish until after he's done it.
Great writing as always. Not my favourite chapter though, to be honest, Ginny's stip show was kind of a turn off for me. I figured it would be Sam calling, but I expected it to be because of a movies, not a strip show and money problems. I wonder if someone in the audience recognized Ginny or Luna, or maybe to a video. I liked the girl-on-girl action between the two of course. And I'm also looking forward to what Ginny is going to do to the lucky birthday boy.
On the NTR discussion in the comments, I say just do what you're going to do. Would personally prefer if you kept it in an open relationship (with maybe some swinging with other couples thrown in), but in the end I trust whatever you decide to do will still end up in a great story.
PS: I also forgot to adress some points by other reviewers. This story can easily go to the route of cheating/cuckholding/NTR (that would be the obvious/often used route). If given a choice I personally would love to see this story move in another direction. Thusfar you have set the stage for something truly unique. Most other stories on this site, that deal with sex outside a single couple, devolve into endless bashing/degrading moments and cheating. But that is not what the story has been thusfar. All the chapters have been a celebration of fun, sexuality, love and acceptance. And i would love the future of this story to hold onto that core.
But I also don't want you to feel pressured in writing it one way or another. If you had planned to go the NTR route, I wouldn't want you to feel obligated to do something different. You have already demonstrated that you are a great writer regardless the future of the next chapters.
So this continues to be fantastic. A happily married couple exploring their kinks? Which includes voyeurism, something of an open relationship and actually acting on both these, all in line with Ginny's past? It's a great read so far, it's incredibly hot and I'm eager to see what Ginny gets up to with the birthday boy next chapter.
I do have to disagree with the commenters though. Part of this story's selling point is the complete lack of NTR. Maybe some minor cuckolding, but going the route of alpha-male/beta-male/humiliation dynamics won't make the story any better than it already is and stands to really bring it down overall.
Bloody brilliant!
I truly cannot wait for the next chapter! While I enjoy seeing Harry and Ginny happy together, I must admit that it would be pretty damm hot were she to have some fun on the side! ;) Or, perhaps even in front of Harry!
I agree with the other reviewers that were asking for more NTR - as I think this story is well suited for it (Though perhaps without too much of the humiliation aspect).
Regards,
MisterEmotion
Bloody amazing! You checked all the boxes that would make a return to the super-steamy-sexy-public fun a true joy to read. A very sexy Ginny. You brought Harry in with his dual nature of voyeur and intimidating mystery guy. And as always the sexy and non-conventional Luna makes every chapter a joy to read. And a great promise/cliffhanger to the next chapter. You checked all the boxes that make this an awesome chapter.
I can't wait to see what kind of 'treatment' the birthday boy get's. And not only that, I eagerly await what you will have in store for us all. I can hardly wait to see more sexy antics and witches!
Great story thus far. I was a little disappointed to not have a Ginny/Oliver sex scene because I'm a NTR fan, but so be it.
As to who's been blacklisting her, I'm not sure it has to do with Harry's enemies. The phone call timing is a bit too perfect, it could be someone wanting to pull her back in the industry.
My bet is on the Muggles who had her fuck on scene and tried to rape her. They were filthy rich and unscrupulous enough, they just need to have a wizard connection to know to target her. There's also the strange coincidence of them being in Surrey...
Anyway, love the story, hope the next chap is coming soon, and please include a little NTR on Ginny's part!
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