Reviews for Extra Credit: ASE Oneshot CollectionBy : Thunderbird |
Hi! I was just reading the deathly hallows and a memory popped up in my head. It reminded me of a fan fiction story called “say my name” that I religiously read as a teen a few years back. So I logged back into my profile (after a bit of difficulty remembering the password) and eventually found it! Just reading my old reviews and your responses made me think of how good these stories are! I was also glad to find that you hadn’t stopped writing and more of your stories were available! So since lockdown is in place, I know what I’ll be up to until lockdowns over! Thank you for this!
A new chapter in this story was such a welcome bonus to ringing in the new year! I must admit that I check for updates almost daily. At first I was a little disappointed that it was Kyle’s POV (I can’t help but crave more Harry POV), but all feelings of disappointment went out the window when I read it. So, so good! Even though he had a relatively small role in the original story I think he played a really important part in Draco coming to terms with his feelings for Harry, much to Kyle’s detriment, which was a bit sad. So I am really glad he got a happy ending. You did a great job developing his character in this chapter, and made him into someone that I think almost everyone can relate to in one way or another. It’s really a fantastic addition to this amazing story! Although Harry and Draco’s POV is my favorite, I do love that you are writing from multiple POV’s. It adds depth to the story that can’t be achieved with a single narrator. I would love to read something from Ron and/or Hermione’s POV. Particularly how Ron feels when Draco apologizes to him. Those two have nearly as much baggage as Draco and Harry, so it would be really interesting to see Ron work through his feelings about his best friend falling in love with their childhood enemy. I think it would also be hysterical to see Snape and Dumbledore’s portraits reactions to Harry and Draco’s relationship, but I know you are probably drowning in requests. I can’t wait to read the next chapter!
Left review on AO3. But yes that did answer a lot of my questions. I really like being able to see harrys POV for this story since unstoppable already shows everyones side (except blaise and ron). Ive always liked seeing a story from different POV's which is why i made JADIP to have both dracos and hermiones side.
where's the rest!?
I was delighted to see another bonus chapter for this story! I've been dutifully checking for updates hoping for something new, but knowing that it's summer/busy/just off the completion of an enormous story, and well, life in general. I LOVED reading this installment. I'm not even sure what else to say about it! You make me want to gush. I adore you. I can't wait (but will happily do so) for more. Thank you.
I feel like a total groupie posting two reviews so close together, but reading Goddess of Dragons review made me remember something I would have liked to see in the original story. I had also always wondered if Harry knew Draco was there in the corridor, or if he ever found out. I think Draco should tell Harry that he was there watching, and it was actually Harry himself that made Draco realize he was attracted to men. It would probably turn Harry on ;-)
I am so happy you are continuing this story! Out of all the Harry/Draco fan fiction I have read this is my favorite, and I was so sad when it ended. It’s great to see things from Harry’s point of view, and I would love more of that. I love the way you developed both of them as characters. I would love to read Harry’s point of view when he finally realizes he has fallen head over heels in love with Draco, and the first time Draco bottoms for him. I think it would also be awesome to do a oneshot where Harry and Draco talk about their experiences in the war. Maybe even Harry apologizing for using sectumsempra on Draco. With all the history between them it just seems inevitable that they would eventually have to discuss it, even if they don’t really want to. Honestly I feel like there is just so much you could do with this story, and I can’t wait to read what you come up with! I anxiously await your next installment!
I love it. One thing that i was wondering about was if harry knew that draco was there but after reading about the following morning it told me that harry didnt know that draco was in the corridor when he threw up the wards. I really like seeing harrys side on this story. The other thing i was interested in was more about how draco felt being in grimmauld place and how harry felt about draco being there with him. As well as when harry started having true feelings for draco.
Here i was about to start typing my next chapter when i saw this and had to read it. I read your review on my latest chapter and figured i would respond on this chapter because then i can tell you sooner that yes i thought about the balcony because of this story but i totally spaced that you used tuscany and that i didnt mean to use it since you already did and i am planning on changing that to a place in greece instead. I think to highly of you to take your ideas (as much as i love them lol) and dont want to make you mad or anything by having you think i did take them (if that makes any sense at all). I still love all your stories and cant wait to read everything that you post. I sincerely hope your not mad at me for using tuscany. Until next time :D
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