Reviews for The Paths We TakeBy : Luckycharms |
Been a year since we've heard from you.. just wondering if you have any plans to update or add more to the story. REALLY REALLY hoping to be able to read more soon but an update at the minimum would be cool. Hope things are going well for you and hope to hear from you soon. :D
New fan here. I found this story a week ago, and find every excuse to just read it non stop. I "dont" love itππ€£ππ€£ I love love love fanfics that pull you in just like a book. And you do that. I just love reading. Fantasy mostly. I mostly come to this site for exactly what you have given. A wholesome story. Yes, there's now naughty bits, but you add them so well it's not all... what's the word? Shut. The plot is so captivating. And the research behind it. I can tell that this has been thoroughly thought through and can only hope to one day have my writing be this good. I haven't written in a very, very long time. But you have definitely inspired me. I think this past year has been an emotional roller coaster for everyone in some way. And a baby boy?! That's so exciting. I will always be checking for new chapters. I can't wait to see how you end this.
I keep coming back to check for a new chapter and I keep rereading this author note. I am soo excited! I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you are feeling well and I am beyond excited that you didn't stop writing this story. I HAVE to see how it ends! lol
Excellent news, both that your OK and about the forthcoming baby. :D
Take your time with the story. Your personal life always comes 1st and especially in a situation like this. Looking forward to seeing more of how the guys and girls get on, although probably would need to re-read from the start to remember everything that's happened.
Its definitely going to be awkward for Ron with both his sister and his ex getting lovy with people he has reason to hate, not to mention Harry and Pansy. Hopefully he will find some happiness himself rather than ending up bitter and alienated.
I cannot get enough of this. It's absolutely perfect. I can tell that you took a great deal of effort and time researching for this and it really shows. I keep checking back to see when you've updated. I know you've got a lot going on right now, so I'm just patiently waiting
Only dropping by to say I'm still with you and I caaaaan't wait for the story to continue! Still amazing. But please don't feel like you are obligated to continue with it, you should give yourself some time to rest too!
And to ask if I can find you on AO3?
Chapter 22 -
“When the light shines upon my crimes, you find it sick, appalling
An infamous, notorious delinquent
There's little more gory a thing than
Living in Victorian England
This is horrorcore, beware if you're a common whore
Or at late night you may find me knocking on your door"
absolutely loved the chapter! I know you've probably finished this book haha and likely won't even see this, but I absolutely love this book so much that I made an account just to tell you! You have done an outstanding job, so well written! Few spelling mistakes here and there but who cares haha, the story is just so well thought of! I've cried a few times throughout the story so far, and I can't wait to keep reading! Well done!
Thank you so much! I love your writing and can't wait for updates. I feel so late to the HP fanfic world despite having loved the books forever. I have started to re-read the story to pick up on anything I have missed !
Well that was hot and like 1_luv215 I also found Harry's joining in with Draco and Hermione very funny, although it was obviously somewhat traumatic for him. I wonder which of Harry or Draco will be the most embarrassed when the four gets back and they find their effectively had a threesome with Hermione!
Like Draco I was initially confused when Hermione insisted she didn't love him. It took until that added “to” that it clicked.
Like Pansy's reaction as well but glad that Harry took control in the way he did. That shows more of his character and also that he's gaining the confidence in the relationship to be himself.
Its going to be Ron suffering the worst with both his ex and his younger sister ending up with people he has reasons to hate and mistrust.
Okay first! That date was so amazing and I so want to visit that resturant! It sounds amazing. Second, I love how Pansy was so sweet and gentle with Harry. All things concidered Harry's life has not been the easiest and the poor dude never got to experience being a teen without all the added Volde drama. I'm glad he finally gets to experience being a young adult for once and I'm honestly really happy it was with Pansy. Your Pansy is amazing and so complex. I love her! It's nice to not see her as the bad guy for once and Ron, sweet Ron, I love how you've protrayed him in this story ass well. Everyone you write for stands out and are written so well. I feel like I'm actually there with them when reading this story.
Now about the latest chapter! Fuck yeah! Smut central! Finally Draco and Hermione get to have some fun and it was definently worth the wait! But poor Harry. I should feel bad for him but truthfully I couldn't help laughing during multiple parts when he realized what was happening. Although I guess it worked out in his favor because he got to learn a few things from Draco which he used on Pansy in order to return the favor of her taking care of him. I do feel though that when Hermione gets home, it's going to be awkward for Harry. Poor man.
Now omfg that ending line! WHAT! Draco better not die! I will literally cry if he does. But you did say "in the end" so I'm assuming that whatever will happen will happen during the last era. Oh I am so scared and excited, and worried and nervous and happy to see what you have planned. Your twists always get me and no matter how hard I try to think of what you may do, you do a 180 and shock us all. I love it! The feels of this story...so much better than a tv show! Can't wait for next week! Of course take your time. no rush. We will all still be here when you decide to post. And thank you so much for continuing even though you're working in real life on top of it all. I can't imagine the stress and hard work you're going through but your dedication to your readers, makes me want to follow you as an author no matter what you may write! Great work!
Well things went quite well there all things considered. Harry and Pansy are settling down as a couple and feeling comfortable enough that they can both have a night together and also make public their relationship.
I have a feeling when Pansy selected the menu items that Harry would have a shock when he realised what escargot was. :) According to the books he did a lot of cooking when with his aunt and uncle but I suspect nothing sophisticated.
Also good development of how inexperienced and nervous Harry was both in terms of simple social interchanges and also sexual experience. Given how hectic his life has been so far he hasn't had much time for a 'normal' existence so probably all too accurate in what he would be like in such a scenario.
As I've said before no hurry with the story. RL always comes 1st and take your time with this. Have a good time anyway and keep well.
Well some fascinating exchanges in both 1999 and 1888. Hermione and Draco still continued to stagger from disaster to disaster but are gradually opening up to each other. I wonder how things will go when the pair of them wake up side by side.
Harry and Pansy seems to be getting more confident with each other as well and some well organised match making by Luna. Love the way Pansy was panicing about what people were saying to each other about her then finds out she's made herself an hero to a lot of the girls. :D Hoping the date will be a success and it looks like it will be so far.
Not sure if Lucy has realised yet the gang's secret, although Draco especially gave a lot away if she's educated enough to understand a lot of what he said and doesn't just assume he's ranting. Definitely gave a clear hint their not the children of the friends Cabel knew during Gettsyburg but the original articles. Suspect there's going to be a chat with her father at some point.
Which brings me to a question. Is there any connection with the restuarant Harry and Pansy are at and Cabal's 'new' surname? That would be a very interesting way of closing a circle. :)
I adore this story! Cannot wait to read the next chapter!
Very good chapter. Especially like the handing of Ron as its very rare in fan-fiction he's not shown up as some sort of buffoon or stupid bigot. The anima mea denigrata is a nasty little twist as any of the people who went through the war could have an attack of it and Pansy was looking distinctly frightening during her bout.
I was wondering why Harry was reacting so badly but as you explained he's still a young lad, with relatively little experience with girls and a hell of a lot on his mind so what seemed like a snub to Pansy was actually just a young lad showing his nerves.
Loved Elizabeth's outburst with Kingsley and her inability [or unwillingness] to get his name right, although I have a lot of sympathy with him as he has been put in an awkward position.
Wow I missed so much! I'm alive btw! Sorry about that. I haven't checked out this site in awhile. Quarantine with the kiddos has kept me away. I'm so glad you're updating again and I loved being able to binge read the chapters I missed. I can't wait to see Hermione's response next chapter and omg the way Draco poured his heart out was so good! And Pansy. Holy hell I did not expect that! She is a badass! I'm happy McGonagall didn't punish her for that. I do wonder though. She mentioned that it wasn't the first time it happened. Will you put in the backstory to that? Ohhh things are getting so good! I can't wait to see Hansy's date too if you show it! Btw, Caleb is amazing! he's so sweet and caring and I'm glad he was able to help Draco open up finally. Wise man and I'm really glad you choose to bring him into this era as well. Theo cracked me up that last chapter when he wiped the potatoes off that ass hat Dan, I think his name was. Kid deserved what he got! Now about the adults. I understand where Elizabeth is coming from but I couldn't help but chuckle some when she started to freak out again and rambled and everyone tried to pretned it wasn't happening by looking at random things lol. But I do love that she got to finally yell at someone. Poor Molly too though. That woman raised all these kids and now she hardly gets to see them anymore on top of that her youngest about to be tried. I can't imagine the pain they are all going through. great job on this story, seriously! it's so amazing! Can't wait for next week! Stay safe!
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