Reviews for Returning to HogwartsBy : TheSlytherinPhoenix |
Well their both totally besotted with each other but doesn't realise the other feels the same so until someone takes a 1st step or something else pushes them into actually admitting how they feel this could be a long wasted oppertunity for them both.
Good to see another update and hopefully things are well at your end.
I don't known if you'll ever see this but I thoroughly enjoyed this story, more so than any other I've read on this site.
It had the plot and build up that is so lacking in other.
I cannot rate this highly enjoy.
I just hope that you may return to complete this one day with several more chapters
Interesting slow burner as they both fancy each other but are convinced the other won't be interested. Although I suspect Harry might take her up on that bet, in a way that would surprise her but also make her very happy if he can get her to enjoy flying.
Thanks so much for writing another chapter. I love how it's building!
Really just a wonderful beginning. Well done! The characterization of Hermoine so far is spot on. Please please please add more soon.
Liking it. A slow burner rather than the quick and crude you get too often. Also two injured people finding an answer to their problems in each other. I get the feeling they will both be nervously dancing around each other for a while yet before either some incident or one of them will get up the courage to act.
Absolutely Fantastic! Please keep it up and let me know if you need any suggestions
Start shows potential. Looking forward to the meat of this tale.
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