Reviews for Returning to HogwartsBy : TheSlytherinPhoenix |
This is such a beautiful story of Harry and Hermione falling in love. I really hope that you continue on with it. Also you are a fantastic writer you have a way of the reader feeling like they are really there.
Just finished chapter 7 and I have to say I love it so far. Not only is your story based in mostly cannon but it also realistic unlike so many other fictions I've read. I can't wait to read more. I love your characterization of both Harry and Hermione so far. I like that Harry isn't the only one with PTSD after all they have been through.
I'd like to know what happened between Harry and Ginny after the war and why they are not together? Where does Harry and Ron stand now? And are you planning to bring Ron into the story at some point or just leave him out and just refer to him sometimes?
Keep up the good work!
Another great chapter!!! Can't wait for the next one. So very good!
Amazing story.
The first fanfic I can actually believe.
Please please please write more if you are able. Im too invested in the story now! Cant wait to read if Neville and Luna's presence move H and H further along and What Harrys and Rons relationship is like now.
big fan!
I stayed up all night reading this, and even though it's late and I've finished what is here, I need to read more. (So I'll start again until there is more to read)
Looking forward to seeing the story progress more and glad you got your computer back up and running
Good to see another chapter and their finally admitting how much they mean to each other. Re-read the entire story to refresh my memory and a very enjoyable read.
Wondering how Luna and Neville will react to the house and also I think how they react to Harry and Hermione being together there could make them overcome their last reservations.
Its a good story wish you would pick it back up from where it was left off
I am just now stumbling upon this gem, and I am ENTRANCED. This was so well written. I need more. I would PAY you to write more. Seriously. That's how badly I need more of this story.
Im loving the story! Ive always thought Harry and Hermione should have been together, and you've been able to write a touching story thats faithful to the characters. I especialy love how you've tied it in with the main books without changing anything other than the "10 years later" chapter.
I cant wait to read more!
Amazing. I love it. Please do not abandon this story but keep writing. I would love to see them together and happy!!
I cannot begin to say how much I enjoyed these added chapters
I have believed that the slow fuse always leads to stories worth reading and moreover enjoying.
As I mentioned before, it is a skill I wish all others would learn, and JKR could have done with as well.
I really hope this series continues to see it becoming a long and beautiful story
My thanks and appreciation to the Author.
Another great chapter! Thanks!
Excellent. Provided Harry doesn't chicken out out they should now be able to be honest with each other. Presuming they stay in separate rooms I wonder of Hermione will find her night terrors gone?
That is a magnificent home although I think it will get even better with Hermione and a few friends there to bring it to real life. He is going to have trouble extracting Neville from that garden however.
Thanks so so much for the new chapter!!! This is the one story I'll read before it's 'complete'. As I've said before I love the characterzation of both Harry and Mione. I feel it's so spot on. My one critique is that I feel they both would be bolder toward each other given what they each have gone through. I realize they each fear rejection concerning their single most important relationship but I still think they would act on their feelings. That being said I love the story so far. Please write more and faster ;). BTW I love Potter Cottage. It's perfect!
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