So that was a change of pace I wasn't expecting but definitely liked. Harry learns a valuable life lesson: just 'cuz it's sex, doesn't automatically make it good. Some partners are notoriously hard to please (which has gotta be rough when you're younger and more prone to pride related injury), you can't always count on vocal partners either and well, really, some people are bound to treat sex differently than you.

Granted treating it like a business transaction almost isn't something you see or hear of oten, but it's amusing as a reader. Plus I liked that Su put Harry through the ringer in trying to get her off, in finding that sideways and from behind is what really gets her going.

Least he has Luna to soothe all those frayed nerves with "normal" sex. XD

So Neville managed to talk his way into Hermione's knickers, huh? Smooth, especially considering Hermione's still basically Hermione!

The actual smut was pretty good too. Not quite as kinky or as hardcore as Harry's scenes, but a bit more realistic and signifcantly more gentle which is hot in its own way.

Well skilful planning and thought and Neville got his aim. Also Hermione found out she likes and is good at something that doesn't involve books. :)

  Good chapter but where do they go now?  Is Neville looking to gain more experience with Hermione or simply looking for other girls so he can catch up with Harry?

Good update and some nice interactions, not just talking about the smut. Loved the exchange between Luna and Ginny especially while Neville's priming of Hermione was well done. I suspect one line has really slammed the door on any relationship between her and Ron now. ;)

You accidentally posted the chapter twice. :)

But what a chapter to post twice. I mean Katie Bell? Yes, please. Even better is the end reveal that even though her time with Harry was enjoyed, it doesn't scratch any particular itches she has since those are usually scratched in gangbangs.

Her preferred method of stress relief. Which is hot as hell and you can hardly blame Harry for going back for seconds, knowing that. And who knows? Maybe Harry will get the chance to see Katie in action in the future.

In other news, Neville is the definition of a sly dog. :D

A good Story, nicely done. Having Luna as the `wild´ Girl be the one who has Harry first was really clever, it really works well of her canon Char-traits. I also really like the advice you have woven in, it should be said more often that you should give your Lady the same pleasure you want to recieve.

One thing i have seen done a bit better, was the distance between paragraphs, you have a bit to much empty Space in the Chapter, maybe you could reduce that a little bit?

Otherwise, nice start, hope to read another Chapter soon

Am a huge fan of your previous two stories, so great to see another story come out. 

This story's start is great and I am looking forward to rest of it.

For a hot minute there I thought this was going to have do with something from Bill & Ted's Excellent Adventure. The places a brain goes.

But I have to say, already a damn big fan of this story. The emphasis on Harry and Neville actually acting like teenagers, especially teenage boys who want nothing more than to get laid is a nice change of pace from Harry being basically the perfect dude who attracts witches naturally. Instead we get a Harry perfectly willing to work with his fame, his own good looks and from this point forward presumably his own skill in bed.

Also a fan of the biggest problem for Harry and Neville being the rumors that fly around the castle. Just a nice touch on canon that makes it all the more believable.

As for the smut...holy shit. I'll say this first: I like the stuff with Luna. She's clearly turned on enough, shaken enough by how good foreplay can be or at the very least a Harry fangirl enough that she goes from mutual masturbation to getting plowed in no time at all. She's entirely in character, you even manage to write her in character while she's being fucked and she's attractive enough without being drop dead gorgeous. It reads like a good first time with about as much hotness as you'd expect. In short she's really fucking hot and it shows.

That being said, the Lily/James, Harry/Jasmine scene was what stole it. Even as his parents prepare Harry for the real thing, even as Sirius does...Harry's already long gone and is a huge pervert who's taste certainly don't remain conventional. No he watches his parents get into a hardcore fuck and takes advantage of the situation by having Jasmine jack him off for pudding.

I've gotta say, I have a lot of hopes for this story. Fooling around with Ginny as she still has a boyfriend (and the insufferable smugness that comes from having her want him more). Luna and Ginny both talking about how good Harry is, maybe leading to a threesome. Harry and Neville both deciding Lavender's too hot to leave with Ron and double team her with one of them always in her mouth. Harry and Neville's combined talents getting out and being tested by other witches. Maybe an endgame of Susan for Harry and Hannah for Neville, with their eventual first times being out of this world.

But those hopes barely match up to the one's I have for Harry continuing as an unknown voyeur for his parents, maybe James/Sirius/Lily if you want to get extra kinky about it. Maybe even going the extra mile and Polyjuicing himself as James to experience the ride that is Lily Potter and getting addicted. As well as Harry hooking up with Jasmine. While none of the future section had anything to do with her, it seems somewhat clear that Harry got away with getting a sisterly wank so either Harry eventually walks in on Jasmine fingerblasting herself and maybe she has the same bad luck Harry has and he helps her out or maybe she hears the rumors and is embarassedly thirsty af for her brother's cock.

So seriously, looking forward to the upcoming smut but hope that there's some Potter family incest in there as well after that amazing setup. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Good start and great fun.  I loved your two previous stories because of the sense of hunour as well as the smut and looks like this is off to a similar start.  Wonder how many witches will be having fun with Harry and Neville.