Reviews for Harry Potter's Most Excellent YearBy : ODB |
Do you do commissions?
Extremely annoyed that there is no 'Subscribe to Author' function on this site, I nearly missed this gem because I got tired of seeing all the slash and Hermione/Insert Slytherin Name stories.
Just like your previous 2 stories, very hot, very naughty, very good. I really hope this wasn't the last we have seen of you, it would be a great loss to this site.
Love the story! Can't wait for your next one, I really liked GW PS, so a darker version of it seems perfect!!!
Well, a little disappointed that we never got to see Harry get it on with Lily especially after the Jasmine chapter, but Harry winding up with Ginny and Luna (plus Jasmine on the side)? That's a pretty damn good ending in and of itself.
Thanks for the story! I'll be sure to check out the next one to see if something darker of yours is as good as the lighter stuff!
Well lets get the bad news out of the way 1st. It ended. :(
However a good ending. Like the exchange between Pansy and Draco :D
Suspected from early in the chapter that Harry would still be in a threesome with Ginny and Luna. Guessed who that was in the “come and go” room. Happy with that as well as a good ending and two very attractive babes.
I was wondering about what happened with Jasmine as well but wonder if that would come out some time and how the other two, let alone Harry's parents would react.
Not sure about a darker version of GW:PS. Know the latter was somewhat unrealistic and while sometimes the darker plots can be entertaining I'm used to a good laugh in your stories as well as the hot sex but have to see how things develop.
Hot damn, this story gets better and better with every new chapter, not only in terms of the kinkily risky and stunningly wanonly depraved sexual activities and love making, now that Ginny has joined the gang. Hmm, that hot shoot and video is certain to get leaked to witch weekly or porn equivelent of it and can't wait to see Draco's reaction that a woman scorned always get her revenge. Plus it was equally hot to see Pansey getting taken down a peg and fucked by two lion studs.
Eagerly looking forward to the finale and seeing how are heroes celebrate finally getting together and being with the women that they love and want: Ginny and Hannah for the rest of their days and in what sexually sumpteous volupteous style and activity.
That was hot. I can't wait to see what would be the final chapter, the guys sharing Narcissa? Do their mothers? There are so many options
One of your classics, both hot and funny. I love the idea of Draco seeing those photos and blowing a fuse.
Also a good way of explaining relations with Slytherin and how Pansy ends up so willing to take part in the fun. Liked the exchange when Ginny was explaining what Pansy's problem as and how she had been kept in the dark by her housemates as to what was actually going on.
Sorry to hear there's only one chapter left of this story. Presumably it will involve Neville finally getting his heart's desire and linking up with Hannah again. :)
Pansy.
Harry, Neville and Pansy with director/photographer Ginny Weasley. All in the name of this is what you're missing out on to Draco, as well as sticking it to Slytherin in general. Plus porn-esque fucking and the possibility of making lots of other hot Slythering girls thirsty af (Daphne on this particular Harry sounds amazing, especially if Tracey joins in)? Holy shit this chapter was fucking epic and I hope to see more like it!
Another good very hot chapter although it sounds like Harry's playing the field may be over, :( at least until he meets his sister again. ;) I wonder how Ginny will think about that? Also I suspect a fair number of girls will be disappointed if both Harry and Neville settle for a single girl.
Think the boys were a bit unsporting and forgetting their manners with their response to Ginny's question “Don’t I get a say in this?” Mind you it would be interesting to see what she decided.
I do wander how any wizards actually qualify from Hogswarts as I suspect many of them are too damned knackered to study much. As you said however reading the story's a very good way to spent time self-isolating.
Femdom and student/teacher sex in the same chapter. You really can't get much better than that and better yet, it was all set up perfectly too. Harry going from worried for his place in Hogwarts to fucking an absurdly hot, dominant, downright dirty older woman?
Nice. Can't wait for more of this pairing in particular, if the story comes back to previous chapters!
And another kickass chapter, this time with Jasmine? If that wasn't hot enough on its own, especially with how clearly you have Jasmine as a female mirror to Harry (in that sex has quickly become an even bigger part of her life because of how much she enjoys it), it's even better because of Lily.
Not only has she been putting on a show out of some belief that it's good sex education (that's kinda hilarious, ngl), but she's watched them and can't help but getting turned on, even getting a little bit jealous. Holy shit. Can't wait until she can't help herself/her jealousy overwhelms/James disappoints, 'cuz something tells me the Harry/Lily, Harry/Lily/Jasmine chapter's going to be one hell of a read. :)
Well that was hot and you had already hinted that it was coming. I rather suspected that their activities wouldn't be a total secret from their parents but was slightly surprised it was so soon and how much Lily was excited about it. Wondering how far family activities will end up going.
Anyway the rugby is about to start so keeping it short but another good chapter.
Another awesome chapter. Once again I like the dynamics beyond just the smut itself, like how both Susan and Hannah are already involved with Justin and Ernie but Justin's just what's expected of Susan and how Ernie's "important" to Hannah, but she hasn't been happy with him in a while and how easy it is for her to sink into things with Neville and Harry.
Definitely makes the ending scene, as kinda depressing as its meant to be out to be a very minor roadblock for Neville. 'Cuz like Harry said, if it's that easy for her to betray Ernie once their relationship clearly isn't going to last. It's just a nice touch to the usual, less involved stuff you can find in most stories.
Everything else was great too. I like that for all Harry "doesn't wanna bang Lily", she's still basically his perfect woman and it was pretty great seeing Harry and Neville with a pair of girls as slutty as they are. The swapping, the sharing, the bisexuality and how easily they both took to going cheek to cheek? Best chapter yet and shows that future chapters have some serious promise.
Looking forward to next weeks update already, dude!
Very funny as Harry struggles to find what works. :) He needs to learn there are more erogenous zones that the groin but he's still pretty inexperienced himself and at least he showed the patience to enough to eventually find her g spot. Hopefully Su will be more relaxed in future, especially if that gives her the confidence and she gets a favourable response from the guy she fancies.
Love that last line to Luna as well.
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