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Reviews for The Effects of a Botched Ritual

By : FestiveBoi
  • From JohnBlack on August 19, 2021

    In Chapter Three, you mention that it has been over six years since Harry returned to the Wizarding World.  But it also seems that he is just starting Hogwarts.  But in Chapter 2 {?}, Sirius says Harry will be getting his Hogwarts letter at eleven, as in canon.

     

    Those three facts can not tie together, as Harry was unable to be found until he was seven years old.  Six years past that would put him at thirteen.


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  • From saxman66 on December 15, 2020

      Interesting developments.  I'm glad that Sirius is proving immune to the spell on Harry so that he's not being driven into hostility toward him.  Do notice he's not mentioned much in the flashbacks after the initial contact.

     

      The spell is likely to make a hell of a difference at Hogwarts however.  Male teachers will be a lot more difficult to handle, definitely including Snape and possibly other characters like Dumbledore and Hagrid.  Definitely going to cause problems with the students as well as he will lack male friends like OTL Ron and Neville and starting to have girls all over him will make that worse as the y grow older as there will be a lot of jealously. 

     

      Sounds like Bellatrix is already getting stronly affected by the spell giving the comments about her clothing [lack of] shortly before Harry leaves for Hogwarts. However it does seem like she has broken the grip Voldemort's influence on her, although what happens when he reappears I don't know.  I wonder who's going to be 1st in the stamphed for Harry's cherry? ;)

     

      Anyway looking forward to seeing how things develop.  Sounds like its going to be a very busy time for Harry but significant different and hopefully less lethal for many people, at least who aren't death-easters.

     

      Makes me think.  Has Harry had the pleasure of meeting Lucius & Draco yet or has Narcissa managed to keep Harry's existence secret?

     

     


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