Reviews for InsatiableBy : BooBack |
I love this story. I think I'm mostly curious about how it looks long term. The porn is great but Hermione seems to be getting in over her head a bit. She wants a relationship with all of them but it seems like she might want something more "traditional" too. I can't wait to see where it goes.
Uh-oh. Going to take some sweet "talking" from Blaise to get out of this sticky situation. I like the porn too but occasionally you do need a bit of plot to move things forward. ðĪŠ. I love your story and am voting for many more chapters. You know I love Drarry and want to keep him in the mix with the other five too. Gonna be tough with a pregnancy in the mix but I have faith in you. Can't wait to see what happens next. ð
Wow. Information overload. ð. Lots of new and interesting tidbits to ponder. Can't wait to see what happens in their busy week ahead. And I still love the good Draco underneath all the snark. ðĪŠ
Um hello!! What a twist ðĐ I can't wait to see what you have in store for this. This chapter was beautifully done, the chesmitry between Draco and Hermione is exquisite and I loved the Drarrry bit. Also Cormac so got what he deserved. Hermione was too nice letting him finish. Anyway I'm down to read whatever you write, including any Ginny/Blaise bits. I love the dynamic um, sextet? + 1? Idk how to say seven with Ginny coming into the mix, that you've got going on. Keep up the great work ðĨ°
Another ending with a twist, aaahhhh. Keeps me guessing. And the twist at the start too with Cormac. Tricky, trick. uh-oh about Cormac. That could prove to be quite a sticky situation. But I did get my two sets of favorite couples in this chapter so that makes me very happy. ð. Love the story and can't wait to see where it goes from here. I'm mostly indifferent about Ginny so alluding to her with Blaise is fine. But either way as long as you keep Draco/Harry and Draco/Hermione with maybe a bit of Blaise thrown in, I'll always be happy. ðĪŠ
This this this! I need more. Thank you for your delicious writing!
I missed to review the last chapter, but loved it! And I looove the turn you take with Ginny, very promising... and I very much enjoyed the talk between Harry and Ron and the emotional talk between Draco and Hermione, gives the story a nice base, not just fluff... but fancy the vibrant chemistry between Draco and Hermione a lot too! Can't wait to read more!
xx Billy
Omg lol he kidnapped him and made him a cuck? Lol wow I love it so much more civil then cutting his dick and balls and shoving then into every open hole he has, much better he learns a lesson that Hermione is his and you don't touch what's his and he may possibly still live after the lesson please update again soon I'm dieing to know what comes next!!!!
Reviewing again because it kills me that smile and I both said 'naughty indeed' ð great minds think alike ððĪŠ
Laughed out loud at the last paragraph. ð. Naughty indeed. Cormac deserves whatever bad comes his way. Getting interesting throwing Ron and Ginny back into the mix but I guess you can't forget about them forever. And Draco and feelings. Makes me feel squishy inside. Can't wait for the next chapter ð
AHH! I literally thought the worst and that maybe it was polyjuice potion! Nope ð can't wait to see how that turns out! (Naughty indeed) Side note, I love Ron in this. He's just so cute ð Also very down for Blaise and Ginny and I'd also be inclined to see Harry and Astoria maybe? I'm excited to read what u have planned! :)) keep up the great work! ð
Hospital?? I'm glad you're okay though! Also forgive me for the late review, I took a few days break from smut ð
But can I just say how much I loved this chapter! Ah I can't wait to see how this unfolds! And is Draco developing some feelings?? ðð I also enjoyed the Harry, Draco Blaise bit, but I'm super intrigued about Ginny.
Keep up the great work, I'm super excited for the next chapter! And feel better! :)
I'm obsessed with this. The trusting polyamory is amazing!!
My my my things are falling in to place nicely, another one for the group to play with she will be fun to play with destroy with their passion and games. I can't wait to see what else they have planned and how it all unfolds. Also the 'thing' that assaulted Hermione should have his bits hexed off after he sees how a real man handles a women like Hermione not his borish rude way and attitude that is a HUGE turn off !!!! ugg
Well please update again soon I can't wait
Glad you're feeling okay. Hospital trips suck! I was happy to see Draco, Harry and Blaise. I was hoping a sooner rather than later with that combo. It's getting intriguing, throwing Ginny into the mix somehow?? And Draco and Hermione are still a good pair, wouldn't mind seeing her take Cormac out completely. ð. Nice to have a good night and good story to read ahead of preparing for the hurricane we're expecting this weekend. Take care of yourself. ð
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