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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Hall of Justice

By : dwmerrell

From ANON - dwmerrell on January 13, 2004
From the author: Thanks for your reviews/emails and your honesty. In response to those who felt Dumbledore and the Chief Justice were too manipulative and cruel, I wish to point out the following: Albus Dumbledore knew his days in this reality were quickly coming to an end. He saw the "writing on the wall": Voldemort and the other evil lords were planning to bring both the magical and non-magical world under their dominion, no matter the cost in human lives and suffering. Therefore, the old headmaster finally came to realize he must do everything within his power to prevent it. He had few options. A world wide conflict with the evil lords was inevitable, and, on their terms, unspeakable. Many, many would die and suffer at their hands. Dumbledore knew the evil lords desired to take over the Ministry of Magic and abolish the Hall of Justice. Voldemort, he knew, woulke tke the reins as "Supreme Lord". A very bleak and hopeless situation, as one can imagine.

Albus Dumore ore knew he had but one chance to win out, and it's successful outcome would depend entirely upon his long made and careful plans being implemented at precisely the right moment in time. Having the right muggle selected to accomplish the job was only part of the master plan. And yes, the Lord Chief Justice was almost tyrantical in his approach, as Dumbledore so wished he would be. Fight fire with fire, turn the powerful dark magic against those who wielded it and, if many were to die, the the evil lords and their associates be the ones. And there must not be one great war or conflict. To allow such to happen would result in the death and suffering of not only many good witches and wizards but all living in the non-magical world. Therefore, their mandate was clear: Kill or be killed; turn the evil lords enormous resources against them; strike out lethally on their own timetable; leave none alive.

Now, about the sex: I wanted to make this a sexual fantasy type story from the start, as I've enjoyed reading so many on this great site. But, I'm soto sto say, I wrote it wrong from many folks point of view. I do apologize if it seems to be written only from a males point of view. Please note, though, the powerful witches I've written into it, including Hermione, Drucila Priest, Graciela Calderon and Deborah Stran. Truthfully, I didn't put the effort into developing my sexual scenes as I should have, as I soon got too wrapped up in the story. However, let me say this: The ring put on the finger of the Chief Justice was meant to be, from the very start, a very powerful and not well understood magical mechanism. Its powerful effect upon the muggle was meant to be exactly as it was written. The powerful charm protecting the Hall of Justice was meant to effect (and did) both males and females who lived under it exactly as I wrote it. Some said the power was just too much and couldn't possibly be. To them I say: Most every friggin' thing in this wonderful, magical worouldouldn't possibly be, but we let our imagination create them and manipulate them to tell our story. Therefore, I ask you ccepccept the writing like that.

I've been asked by a number of you if I'll do a rewrite. I have. It is posted as an "R" rated story on another site. I corrected many grammatical mistakes along the way, too. However, I'm sure one of my old English teachers would love nothing more than to whack me over the head with a grammer book for my many mies. es. I had to tame the sex parts in that story before the other site would allow it to be posted. I'm sure there are still a number of people, both male and female, who'd like to whack me, too. In their minds, I'm certain they still feel I went too far. To them I have only one thing to say: If you don't like my story, don't read it. Simple, huh? :)

Finally, to the one reviewer who did not like the fact the newly appointed Lord Chief Justice said to Dumbledore, "You must know I have never been a very tolerant man and I
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From ANON - rubberduck on January 02, 2004
i just finished reading the story and i must say it was quite the epic. thrilling and exciting. this little space't 't quite big enough to go into all the details i would like to address so let me just say, i very much enjoyed reading it but there were some points i take exception too. mostly it was the portrayal of tomenomen. it seemed to me that they were made to be beneath the men. they were there to pleasure the guys no matter what. i found it rather hard to read. a lot of times i glossed over the sex because of that. i don't know if that is the author's actual view of women. anyway, i don't mean to have this sound harsh, it was a good story, a huge plot that worked well. will you be writing more?
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From ANON - sauleanne on December 31, 2003
Before I begin my remarks let me state for the record that I read this entire fic and this is just my personal opinion. I almost stopped halfway through but decided that since I would review it, I should finish reading it. I have a few good things and many critical things to say.
First the good. I thought your expansion into the international world of magic was really interesting. Meeting witches and wizards from South and North America and Eastern Europe and discussing their different traditions was intriguing. And I admit that I enjoyed it when Hermione blew up Lucius Malfoy. Also the first few chapters had some compelling character development, especially of your main character. But I got a bad feeling when the man nominated for Chief Justice states that he
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From ANON - rubberduck on December 27, 2003
i just started reading the story so i'm a bit behind. only read about 10 chapters so far. seems like a good plot, the idea of a chief justice rounding up bad guys and such. lots of action in there, however the drama about it isn't so good. talk about total male fantasy. every girl that works for the guy becomes horny? come on. and of course you make it so the guy magically de ages and becomes this virile good looking guy instead of the middle aged man he is. that's hard to swallow. since you've written so much, my comments are pretty useless, but just for future reference, actual character development could have been used to have sexual feelings grow instead of making them magically appear. don't get me wrong, male fantasy is all well and good (i'm a male and have them myself) but i think it's a bit much for the story. but as they say 'that's your opinion'.
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From ANON - Dawn on December 24, 2003
Hey,
I just finished this version of the Fic and I must say, I like it even more than the edited version.
Which is really saying something because I loved that version.
Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more from you!
- Dawn
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From ANON - steph on October 29, 2003
what were thinking when you wrote this???? are you out of your freakin mind? "pull down your pants and show me your thing"..."i want to drink your juice"....? if someone said that to me in real life i would bolt out of that room like nobody's business. two words...THERAPY
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From ANON - GadoTheLion on September 13, 2003
bloody muggles! always snooping around in stuff that dont consern them! hagrid should have killed em when he had the chance but now they have a bigger problem with albus on the way! OBLIVIATE bye bye memory! hahahah this will be interesting to see what happens!

update soon plz!

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From ANON - GadoTheLion on September 06, 2003
well now this latest chapter in interesting to say so.......... confusing but interesting...... i think i reread last chapter to clearify........ anywho keep em coming i still here waiting!

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From ANON - GadoTheLion on August 31, 2003
hey there well i was about to say where is the new chapter? cause i wanna read more here!

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From ANON - GadoTheLion on August 30, 2003
wow now this is wild!...... i think i had this story figured out and boom something else happens! well i guess this is why i was saying write more plz! i love the way this is playing out now can we get just a bit more ass and what not played out before or very eyes????

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From ANON - GadoTheLion on August 23, 2003
wow now this is interesting i like the turn this story just made! Now correct me if i am wrong, course you have not wrote all his powers out yet but anywho.... does a druid not have polymorphic power.......... meaning shape shifting... lythopothic.... wolves and bears and what not....... just a idea i had dont know if ya can use it...... i do like the fact ginny is back to normal her and draco..... now there is another one of my favorite pairings....... course our our story he is dead so........ well you know how that goes, anywho... i love this story plz next chapter sooooooonnnnn....

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From ANON - specialphreak on August 20, 2003
this keeps gettin better n better!!!
keep up the awesome work!!!
specialphreak~
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From ANON - GadoTheLion on August 16, 2003
wow so there is a mage in this story cool! i like mage's! harry alone in America..... well now this could be good or bad depends on wethier he ges to a night club or not.... i hope you update sooon i cant wait for the next chapter!

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From ANON - GadoTheLion on August 15, 2003
well i have been checking man where is the story????????? i hope it aint done!!!! that would be sad............ plz PLZ update ned to know more!

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From ANON - GadoTheLion on August 06, 2003
Small note from his Mistress: He is still bothering me to read the story and fraterated *cough cough* that I haven't yet so we can discuss it. I'll let my slave have the computer now.

Gado:OMG!! another chapter! i cant wait to see these low down no good son of a *cough* get what they deserve! it has after all been a long time coming! I pray that this story is not winding down i enjoy it to much! but as it goes i would wish you all the best and i sure hope that hermione and harry have more kids(My Fav. Pairing...if i have not said that yet) anywho good luck with the rest of the story i cant wait to read more keep em coming i cant wait for long though.....i will blow a gasket.......

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