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Reviews for Aftermath of War

By : razldazzl72
  • From merdatay on April 11, 2007
    I rated this a ++ because it seemed to be written more like an outline for a story then written like the final draft itself. I feel a thesaurus could have been used many times throughout. Also because of the way it was written i found myself not nearly as intersted as i could have been because i lost respect for it in that sense.
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  • From ANON - Kelly Zuerlein on November 17, 2006
    I hope to see more of this story soon i have really enjoyed what I have read so far.
    K.
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  • From ANON - JJ on October 09, 2005
    You've left this story off at a climactic point without finishing it. It's very interesting and only needs a final chapter to finish it. Any chance you'll do so?
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  • From ANON - Yve on July 31, 2003
    read so far: Ch 1-3 (1-7?)
    I love this Harry character development although the he seems to be adjusting alittle too easily . He truly seems confident and capable now. I especially love the "god-house" effect on him. :-)

    I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2003
    Do you think that you could do more on this story, this is getting really good so far and i wanna know much more of Remus' reaction to being in the house and will Harry take him on a tour of the house.
    Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Winstin on June 26, 2003
    Holy shit I love this fanfic! Please update it asap, I'm sure that everyone who has read this will be appreciative. This is one of the best Harry/Sev stories I have read in a long time. I love the way you made Harry the Heir of Gryffindor but didn't make it the main plot as any stories do. Also the way you made Harry beleive himself a murderer is what I truely believe he would do. You did an excelent job not making them OOC.
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  • From ANON - Turtle on June 22, 2003
    Minnie

    This was great. I hope you write more on this story. If you do would you mind letting me know. I will probably see if you have on your lj or whatever.

    Turtle
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  • From ANON - Kit on June 17, 2003
    This story is awesome! I love the maturity of Harry & Sev's rrelationship. Harry is one tough guy, man!
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on June 16, 2003
    Ron is such an arse! Harry went a bit overboard but, hey, he's had a stressfull life.
    More smut would be nice, but that's just my opinion. hehehe. Sev. wants to stay at
    the house with Harry. Is that just because of the potions stuff? I hope not. Thanks
    for the update.
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  • From ANON - arcee on June 16, 2003
    Cool I love how this is going . I love Sev Harry romances..
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  • From ANON - mikochef22 on June 16, 2003
    Okay thank you, now More please. Thank You Very Much ;)
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  • From ANON - Empress on June 15, 2003
    It cuts off. It just cuts of mid word in the middle of a hot lemon. IT"S NOT FAIR!!!!
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  • From ANON - mikochef22 on June 15, 2003
    Where is the rest? I want the rest!!! Please? Thank You Very Much ;)
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  • From ANON - faithlslayergal on June 14, 2003
    Brill, keep it go fai
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